|Reviews for Angel Undercover|
| squirtlepokemon215 chapter 42 . 1/22
one journey ends but another begins! amazing job!
| Yukina zero chapter 3 . 3/21/2020
But she didn't make a wish! In the anime But I asked for friends or some crap, she should have done something here!
| PipeDreamPrayer chapter 42 . 5/19/2017
I really enjoyed this when I read it before I got an account, but there was something about the conclusion that niggled at me
It didn't feel entirely satisfactory and after re-reading it now I get why: after all the fuss about needing the girls before anything could be done it didn't feel like their presence DID very much
the magic was barely used, and when it was it was more often than not to rectify a situation that wouldn't have arisen if not for the girls presence e.g. shielding them with an illusion wouldn't be necessary if they weren't there
I know that defeating the bad guy can't always be big final battles, but watching as they were sniped just felt...like it could have been done ages ago
I loved, loved, loved this story, and i'm totally favouriting it now that I can, but the ending was definitely disappointingly mundane because the girls may as well have not even been present for the defeat, potentially even the entire event, which sucks because I TOTALLY LOVE THIS
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 41 . 5/3/2017
I wish someone besides Seto had gotten to summon something. Even just a chirping Kuriboh would have been funny!
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 22 . 5/2/2017
Ah, Joey. You are hilarious and I love these two together.
| gaarasgirl389 chapter 42 . 2/6/2017
Once again, I reach the end of the chapter, swipe for the next one and . . . find out that's the end. Why? I want more! That was so abrupt! Really well written story!
| R.S.L chapter 20 . 1/21/2017
XD WAY TA GO JOEY poor seto joey has done many a joey proud
| PipeDream chapter 42 . 1/21/2017
That was so sweet!
| PipeDream chapter 40 . 1/21/2017
From what I remember of the pharaoh
So suguroku remembers his past life as well?! No wonder he has Exodia!
| PipeDream chapter 39 . 1/21/2017
Somehow that felt anticlimactic
Good, but a bit...not quite there
| PipeDream chapter 38 . 1/21/2017
Firstly, I'm wondering how G and H got Seto buy not the others if they all came of their own free will
Secondly HOW AM I ONLY NOW GETTING THAT GOZOBURO IS THE UNCLE WHO OVERTHREWATOMS FATHER
HE'S YAMIS COUSINS STEPFATHER
HE'S HIS UNCLE
THE HELL IS WRONG WITH ME?!
| PipeDream chapter 38 . 1/21/2017
I love the character developmental and bonding in your other stories, but I absolutely love how in this the emphasis is on how they all just click and they're not getting much chance to worry about how abrupt it is. They can enjoy being relieved when they're reunited and that's about it, and that's leading them to cut out he middle man and just accept that they're soul mates
The existence of soulates in this world also probably helps that
| PipeDream chapter 37 . 1/21/2017
Wasn't expecting that
Also, speaking of changing clothes, have they been in the academy uniforms this entire time?!
| Guest chapter 37 . 1/21/2017
Jeez this is intense..,
| Guest chapter 36 . 1/21/2017
The whole thing with the 8 being close and connected and not entirely wanting to admit how much so is incredibly sweet
Bakura especially with how he refuses to admit he even likes Yami and Seto but uses Ryous wellbeing to justify being protective of Mariku even though he's known both of them for such a short period of time
I love it