Reviews for The host-Jared's POV
pheonix chapter 8 . 6/1/2015
Great reading. Love the Jared POV. Please continue! Cant wait for when you have him start feeling kinder towards Wanda...
Bloodwolfbeast chapter 4 . 6/16/2014
Kinda a real time flip change not wat I was expecting
randomreader502 chapter 8 . 1/22/2014
Update! You're killing me!
randomreader502 chapter 4 . 12/22/2013
Oh, the TYPOs!
Operative CG16 chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
They're not really that distant in age right? Right?
CaliforniaGrown760 chapter 7 . 9/6/2013
It took a few chapters to get in to it. but now I'm hooked! and like ALL the other stories on here, this hasn't been updated in a while!
CaliforniaGrown760 chapter 2 . 9/3/2013
I like it so far but wish you would stick to the story that way its more of what we expect to hear but from his POV. But good writing so far!
aDAMproblem chapter 8 . 8/15/2013
Please update ! The last time you updated was on my birthday
CookieMonster chapter 8 . 7/19/2013
Kyle the bossy man? Hahah thats genius! :P
Destiny chapter 8 . 7/18/2013
honestly I think u did really great! considering u decided to be jared and it is confusing when ur basing it off the book I think ur doing an amazing job btw! I hope u keep writing on this!
googliebeargummy chapter 6 . 7/15/2013
this is so amazing
Emma chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
Just started reading this one and I think its going pretty well, you should consider making the 9th chapter :)
maudlovescheese chapter 8 . 7/10/2013
this is really good and I think you should continue to write chapters. i loved the Host as a point of veiw from Wanda but with Jared you explain well what goes through his head. please continue to write, its really good
Doododooodoo chapter 8 . 5/10/2013
Its okay but you need to fill in the gaps which are away from Wanda because that is the whole point of doing it from Jareds point so don't just use a thesaurus to change the book you have to write things with details and not things that we could easily guess add your own personal touch to this
Sleberle1 chapter 8 . 5/8/2013
It's actually chapter 8 where the twenty-nine days is explained, and that's from when they met til going to Jared's cabin; not their whole relationship prior to Mel leaving for Chicago. Melanie is 17 when her and Jared meet, and she's 20 when Wanda is inserted. Jamie is nine when they first meet Jared, and he's 14 when Wanda gets to the caves. So like I said, your timelines are totally off in the first several chapters... you can make whatever changes you want since it's your fanfic but those drastic changes definitely change the depth and intensity of their relationship and leave the story a little flat.
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