Reviews for Return of the Diamonds
EndxOfxDarkness chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I really liked the mist and cloud guardians, and I loved your style of writing. Can't wait to meet the others
WrittenWhim chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Wow, great intro! It was well written out and your Italian sounded fine, from the little that I know. Can't wait to see the other guardians soon!
Rebi-chan chapter 2 . 4/6/2013
Sent it to you
I can't login chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Sky or Storm
Name: Neon, Armando

Nicknames: Slinet Storm or Setting Sky

Age: 16

Height: 167(cm)

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Sright

Hair: Long shunlder leaght hair that is ussuly tie in a pony tail. Red high light are randomly palce.

Eyes: Ruby red that hold Empathy.

Current location: mansion in the wood

Birthplace: Ca, USA

Our Family name: Diamante Family

History- they were good friends with the Vongola family but for odd reason they stayed neutral to them, they hardly contacted them if there was trouble. 'Our' great Primo was no other than Fiora Le Beau, a kind, loveable, caring, and yet sad woman, She treated her family well despite everything that went through in the family (A/n: You'll learn more about this family and their problems), for some odd reason the diamond pendants she received for a strange woman only drifted her family more apart. Her right hand woman also her Rain guardian was the closest in the group, soon their family was plunged in madness and chaos by the diamond pendants that was decorating each and everyone of the guardian's neck. Soon she had no choice but to bind the family in a world of chains, bound and unable to escape the darkness from the center of the world one by one, they died, unable to escape the painful fate of the sad history, the diamante family was no more...generations passed and Fiora waited and waited for a new generation that would succeed what she has not..

Diamond Pendant:It looks like a dark orange ribbon that is wrapping around a big diamond in the center like its trying to keep it away from harm.

Diamond ring: Redish orange

Diamante ring: it looks like a diamond ring that has 4 small diamonds pelted across of it. (unlocked form: the diamond is a crescent shape that has a metal ribbon that keeps it on your finger but the ribbon is pitch black.)

Diamante symbol: a crescent moon with a black diamond in it and a black wing and white wing on the opposite sides.

Diamante Guardian: Sky or Storm (Storm perfomly)

Diamante Pendant Locker: Magma Deamon

Ability- locked

Skills: Can talk English and japaness. Is emphatic and have an empathy sight, can see emotion.

Weapon(s): Two pistols

Box Weapon: An engle name Neo, can asobor flames and unless powerful roars.

Attire(s): He has fair skin and runner body. From top to bottom, he has long white hair that is hold back by a violet headband, and red highlight vine that nearly cover his right eye. Small glasses cover his ruby red eyes. Slight burns, looking like claws marks, begin from the bottom of his left eye and end at his chin. An amber necklace hangs from his neck stopping at his blue shirt. His red, sleeveless, jacket covers most of his body, ending past his belt. A black serpent dragon is on the back. Black pants, that have metal keen pads, and white shoes, which are iron toe, covers his legs and feet. Two fingerless gloves cover his hands, the patters of dragons on them. His left wrist to shoulder is cover by white bandage. And finally old rosary, with the words corruption can be bless curve in, is chain to his jacket.

Likes: Ice-cream, Slients, and family

Dislikes: Waking up, People who break the slients, and thoes who eat his ice-cream

Fear(s): Spiders

Personality: Armando is very shy and hate being out of his comfort zone. He is easily mad but quite consent. While cold he is much protected to his friends.

Past: He was taken in by the family after ten year of living on the steets. He was then triend to become a guridan, even thought it was undiced which one he'll be. Hislove of reading had made he shy but very bight.

Extra Strengths 1-10 (10 being highest)

Strength: 7

Agility: 10

Defense: 4

Endurance: 7

Wisdom: 10

Intelligence: 10

mentality: 8

How did you meet my Oc: No

What do you like or hate about him:

What you think about Vongola: Have alove hate reasltionship outlook

Protagonist or Antagonist?: Protagonist

Why?: Is someone who will alway help his friends and the incent

Crush(es): Undecide (You decide)

Friend(s): The family

Enemy(ies): None so far
Rebi-chan chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Can I join...?
I'm posting from my phone right now, so I'll PM you later.
alkizor chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
hopefully you still need new characters
Name: (Rendell/Zephyr) (You could always pick another language name you know...but it must be last/first for now for Japanese tradition)

Nicknames: enigma, tundra

Age: 18

Height: 182.88 (cm)

Gender: male

Sexuality: straight

Hair: (shoulder length silver hair that has natural curls that have been jokingly referred to as "devil horns", )

Eyes: (normally a stormy gray color, but may change based on certain situations, such as a sudden burst of inspiration/understanding will cause them to become an incredibly clear blue, or an enraged state being a venomous yellow)

Current location: the mansion (you could join in the mansion in the woods if you want, I don't blame you for not wanting to be with the others in your family)

Birthplace: A small unknown town in America

Our Family name: Diamante Family

[[[[[[History- they were good friends with the Vongola family but for odd reason they stayed neutral to them, they hardly contacted them if there was trouble. 'Our' great Primo was no other than Fiora Le Beau, a kind, loveable, caring, and yet sad woman, She treated her family well despite everything that went through in the family (A/n: You'll learn more about this family and their problems), for some odd reason the diamond pendants she received for a strange woman only drifted her family more apart. Her right hand woman also her Rain guardian was the closest in the group, soon their family was plunged in madness and chaos by the diamond pendants that was decorating each and everyone of the guardian's neck. Soon she had no choice but to bind the family in a world of chains, bound and unable to escape the darkness from the center of the world one by one, they died, unable to escape the painful fate of the sad history, the diamante family was no more...generations passed and Fiora waited and waited for a new generation that would succeed what she has not..]]]]]] - important

Diamond Pendant: White

Diamond ring: White

[[[[[Description on how it looks(pendant): It looks like a (White) ribbon that is wrapping around a big diamond in the center like its trying to keep it away from harm. (yellow)

Diamante ring: it looks like a diamond ring that has 4 small diamonds pelted across of it. (unlocked form: the diamond is a crescent shape that has a metal ribbon that keeps it on your finger but the ribbon is pitch black.)

Diamante symbol: a crescent moon with a black diamond in it and a black wing and white wing on the opposite sides.]]]]]] - very important

Diamante Guardian: Ice (but you can change it to something else if you prefer

Diamante Pendant Locker: Amarok (give me a name with demon in it)

Ability- none (counts for most of you unless you want to give me ALOT of details on how you unlocked it)

Skills: Possesses near perfect knowledge and ability to use any regular object as a weapon, kicking techniques

Weapon(s): a scythe with a jute on the base to nock the enemies weapon out of their hand, a specially designed crossbow that automatically reloads, anything else he has on hand

Box Weapon: Gilgamesh (a watch that distorts the opponents sense of time)

Attire(s): (dark tennis shoes, white track pants (for mobility) collared shirts, dark sweater (that he wears even in summer))

Likes: quiet, reading, rpg games

Dislikes: Guns, Gay people

Fear(s): (major: being in front of crowds)

Personality: tries to be cold and detached, but is actually a funny person, however most of his "jokes" are sarcastic comments about the very people laughing at them, occasionally has bursts of understanding in which whatever he was trying to figure out suddenly becomes incredibly easy (he once spent 3 days staring at a math problem before he figured it out and when he did it took seconds to do)

Past: when he was a child he was made to take medicines that were supposed to control his hyperactivity (which it did), but what it was really doing was turning him into a cold hearted assassin that they could use, he was also subjected to tests that would desensensitze him to the idea of killing, but this was stopped by the Diamante Family, however as he was just a test case they had no way of fully reversing the effects the medicine had on him, he found out that his parents had actually sold him to the doctors for the testing, which caused him to accept their offer to join the Diamante Family

Extra Strengths 1-10 (10 being highest)

Strength: 5

Agility: 8 (running, dodging, etc.)

Defense: 4 (blocking)

Endurance: 4

Wisdom: 6

Intelligence: 6

mentality: 6

How did you meet my Oc: (read past)

What do you like or hate about him:

What you think about Vongola: doesn't really care one way or the other

Protagonist or Antagonist?: protagonist

Why?: wants to make sure that no one ever has to be subjected to tests like he was

Crush(es): none (that he is willing to admit to)

Friend(s): he does not use the term friend to refer to anyone as friend because anyone he did in the lab would disappear the next day, so he is afraid that if he does they will vanish

Enemy(ies): the doctors that were able to escape
Justamonochromaticguy chapter 2 . 4/6/2013
Good chapter to the guys who are still writing new oc there is a story called 11th generation mafia school by shinobu and it needs a lot of ocs
WrittenWhim chapter 2 . 4/6/2013
Interesting history, can't wait to find out more! Good luck with finding a Sky, Storm, and Sun! As always message if you need anything I'm up for helping! D
EndxOfxDarkness chapter 2 . 4/6/2013
Can't wait for the story to begin and I liked how made you the past of this family, it's really original
Justamonochromaticguy chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Name: (kingston nicolas) (You could always pick another language name you know...but it must be last/first for now for Japanese tradition)

Nicknames:tesla the master of lighting and electricity prometheus

Age:17

Height:1.78 (cm)

Gender:male

Sexuality:straight

Hair: black with dark green hair in the front hair is always neat

Eyes: green wit a litlle maroon in them

Current location: the mansion parents too busy to take care of jim since he sas born

Birthplace:czech republic prague

Our Family name: Diamante Family

[[[[[[History- they were good friends with the Vongola family but for odd reason they stayed neutral to them, they hardly contacted them if there was trouble. 'Our' great Primo was no other than Fiora Le Beau, a kind, loveable, caring, and yet sad woman, She treated her family well despite everything that went through in the family (A/n: You'll learn more about this family and their problems), for some odd reason the diamond pendants she received for a strange woman only drifted her family more apart. Her right hand woman also her Rain guardian was the closest in the group, soon their family was plunged in madness and chaos by the diamond pendants that was decorating each and everyone of the guardian's neck. Soon she had no choice but to bind the family in a world of chains, bound and unable to escape the darkness from the center of the world one by one, they died, unable to escape the painful fate of the sad history, the diamante family was no more...generations passed and Fiora waited and waited for a new generation that would succeed what she has not..]]]]]] - important

Diamond Pendant:white

Diamond ring:green

[[[[[Description on how it looks(pendant): It looks like a green ribbon that is wrapping around a big diamond in the center like its trying to keep it away from harm silver

Diamante ring: it looks like a diamond ring that has 4 small diamonds pelted across of it. (unlocked form: the diamond is a crescent shape that has a metal ribbon that keeps it on your finger but the ribbon is pitch black.)

Diamante symbol: a crescent moon with a black diamond in it and a black wing and white wing on the opposite sides.]]]]]] - very important

Diamante Guardian:diamante lighting guardian

Diamante Pendant Locker:behemoth's lighting

Ability- none

Skills:knows by memory all the book he read is a fencing champion (not the olympic one the martial art) currently researchin electromagnetism to use as an ability perfect shooting skills

Weapon(s):deathray gun prototype 2 longswords

Box Weapon: silver back gorilla the gorilla change into an armor of great attack and defence it also has 2 large tesla bulbs that are deattachable in his back

Attire(s): likes wearing suits and even his pajamas resemble suits only uses his labcoats in laboratories

Likes:lemon grapes his friends his laboratory

Dislikes: human experimentation and slave market

Fear(s): the fear of being all alone

Personality: he has a good personality that because of his fears try to make friends since he possibly is the oldest of the guardians he tries to advice them and help them

Past:descendant of inventor nikola tesla he is a genuis since an early age his parents were never around him so he always took care of himself he has lighting and cloud flames

Extra Strengths 1-10 (10 being highest)

Strength:5 normally 8 in armor

Agility: 5 normally 8 in armor

Defense: 5 normal 9 armor

Endurance:8 9.5 in armor

Wisdom:9.8

Intelligence:9.9

mentality:8

How did you meet my Oc: he helped him escape the laboratory

What do you like or hate about him:nothing really only that's he is a good person who is hiding it

What you think about Vongola:they're good guys

Protagonist or Antagonist?:protagonist

Why?: why not?

Crush(es):none at the moment but later

Friend(s):all from his family verde

Enemy(ies): a descendant of edison who has lighting and storm flames