|Reviews for The Unsolvable|
| The Mocking J chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
Ok, another OC, that's cool. But as a previous reviewer mentioned, I'd love to see Luke interact more with the Harry Potter cast, and how he gets on in magic classes! Since Luke can talk to animals, maybe he could become friends with Hagrid? (We all know about Hagrid's obsession with weird and wonderful creatures.)
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/3/2013
MORE! Can you have Luke interacting with The trio? And Dumbledore? Please update!
| James Birdsong chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
Good two chapters MollyPower2205.
| Shini-Shinjitsu chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
waitwaitwait. if Harry and crew are in there fourth year, then the goblet of fire.. omg. feels
| Victoria-White-Cat chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
This was really good! I'm quite enjoying this story!
| Hanhan2000 chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
That's really good Molly! Write quickly! Happy Birthday for tomorrow by the way! Xxxxxxx
| lolidge19 chapter 2 . 5/14/2013
I said I'd review, so. Ha.
| The Mocking J chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
(I'm afraid you can't steal Luke. You see, I've already kidnapped him along with Clive Dove...)
Cute chapter, and OF COURSE Luke would have an cat for an animal companion. Good choice. XD
Mollie (and her kitty Clover) seems really sweet. She has an adorable accent. I hope we hear more about her character later. So, she's Seamus Finnigan's little sis? I swear Seamus' DAD was the Muggle in that family, and his mum was the witch... Oh well, guess you can always go back edit it.
"Really?! Wow! I've seen you in all the papers!" she gasped, "I'm a big fan of you both!" [Is Luke meant to mention Professor Layton beforehand?]
Cool, so Luke might interact with Harry and his friends. That should be interesting.
And perhaps you could show a "memory" about how they met in Diagon Alley next chapter?
| The Mocking J chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
Professor Layton Harry Potter Epic.
Luke sounds so cute, I can just imagine him screaming: "I'm gonna be a wizard Professah!" Having him be the main character (filling in Harry's role) is a good idea. He, the professor and Hagrid sound pretty in character, which is a great start.
The only thing I would say is make sure you start a new line whenever someone new is speaking.
This is exciting... I wonder if Luke will meet some of the other PL kids (Flora, Arianna, Tony etc.) on the train?
| ScaredOfTheBlueBadger chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Thank you! I hope you enjoyed it! There would be another chapter up if my beta reader, (not naming names... LOLIDGE19) would respond to me!
| Victoria-White-Cat chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
This is really good, keep going! Thanks for the mention, by the way :)
| lolidge19 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
YEAH! GO MOLLYPOWER!
Ahem. Awesomesauce chapter.