|Reviews for For Without Hope We Are Lost|
| AOM chapter 8 . 6/7/2007
I loved this story and was very sad to see that it was last updated in 2003.
It was only when you posted the link to Jello Anarchy on your profile that I realized you completed this story years ago! I just want to say that was a beautiful ending and you are totally evil with cliffhangers.
Lastly, you really should put a note in your bio about the state of completion of some of your stories. *runs off to read the other 'completed' series*
| JediMacLaren chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
This is a very compelling story. The only problem I find with it is the sad fact it's not finished. When can we expect it to bridge Episode 3 and 4 by getting Obi-Wan back to Tatooine? And what will happen to Emeute? Great story. Thanks.
| JC-Puzzler chapter 8 . 2/17/2005
HEY! You can't just end it here! Are you going to do an update anytime soon? *looks back over story* Oh, right. You haven't updated since... *looks again, blinks* MAY OF 2003? *takes deep breath* *mutters* Okay, I can do this...I can handle the fact that there's been no updates in the last (almost) two years...I can do this... *looks up, hearing snickering, is indignant* Well, at least -I- update more frequently than that... *mutters again* Okay, so maybe I made sure that my story had an ending first, but...
Anyways, great story... Sad, especially considering the time frame and everything poor Obi's having to deal with, but from my understanding of SW, you're doing a good job...
Also, I enjoyed reading your 'Book of Paths' series... My question about it is, what happens (happened) to Bali? (You can't just leave it hanging! -Oh, right...You're the author... I guess you -can-.) In the OT, Obi-Wan went to keep an eye on young Luke... Does Bali end up dying? Turning? *shudders at thought* *shrugs* Oh, well. Guess I'll just have to wait and see if you do any updates...
*sits back and waits, semi-patiently* ;)
| MeShelly chapter 3 . 6/20/2003
::blinks:: Can it be? The bounty hunter Ruan has a heart? (And apparently a very large cashbox...)
I love how you color everything in shades of gray. Nothing is clear-cut: in fact, nothing is clear. If you do not plan on becoming a published writer, the world will lose a potential wonder. Your ability to transmit emotions and realism into words is *amazing*. I could almost cry for Obi...but it's more like a desperate despair feeling. He's too tired for tears.
Onto Chapter 4...(ugh! I can't believe I missed so many updates!) Michelle
| mvdiva chapter 8 . 6/7/2003
Another highly involving story. Very enjoyable to read. Obi-Wan stays true to form, and other characters create a rich background for the time of the Jedi Purge.
| slytherinsela chapter 7 . 5/29/2003
| slytherinsela chapter 6 . 5/27/2003
very, very cool. i really enjoy your work- keep it up!
| Leela74 chapter 6 . 4/19/2003
Fantastic! Keep it up!
| ewan's girl chapter 6 . 4/11/2003
very interesting story... it is so refreshing to read a story that doesn't have to do with some kind of romance or silly teeny bopper themes...I am really interested in this story...keep it going...
| Leela74 chapter 5 . 4/5/2003
I've glad you've finally updated this. Very intimidating. Hope you update soon!
| Starkiller chapter 5 . 4/4/2003
This is fantastic! You're a very talented author (not to mention artist! Luv your website ) Hope to see more of this soon! It's going in my favs for sure _
| froggy chapter 3 . 4/3/2003
I hadn't even known this existed! Obi on the run. So interesting. thanks
| christianjames chapter 2 . 1/4/2003
he can't be dead, can he? Please, please, please continue this, the tension is killing me. Oh yeah, i almost forgot to say- you're a brilliant writer!
| MeShelly chapter 2 . 8/26/2002
AHA! Ruan's been outsmarted-that dead man isn't be Obi-Wan, is he? Looks like Ruan won't be getting his fame this way, but I do wonder where Obi-Wan is headed. PLEASE continue this? Please? Michelle
| MeShelly chapter 1 . 8/25/2002
What a dreary reality! It seems fairly obvious that Palpatine is a tyrant(reminds me of Hitler; especially how he glorifies himself) but why does no one fight him? Well, yeah, they end up dead, but everyone fought... Anyway, I love your writing style! So much sensory detail and emotion all wrapping around a mysterious plot. Must read next chapter now! Michelle