Reviews for A Master of Two Servants
mizzymel chapter 38 . 11/23/2015
I want to read this so bad, but it's been left without update for a very long time and I try not to read WIPs, specifically abandoned ones. But I couldn't help it, so I read it anyway. Please continue this.
FateOfChaos chapter 16 . 12/5/2014
Such suspense! I love it! It keeps you on the edge of your seat! This was a lovely chapter; can't wait for the next one!
wryter501 chapter 38 . 5/9/2014
is this the ending, then? you haven't marked it complete... it's kind of interesting to read how other authors on this site view the idea of destiny/prophecy...
wryter501 chapter 35 . 5/9/2014
it's an interesting conundrum that i don't remember seeing another writer address - the complications of making merlin court sorcerer. it's really not a simple appointment, is it...
wryter501 chapter 29 . 5/9/2014
lightning is impressive, but i don't believe we saw enough bamf!emrys in the series, not like this!
oh, dear, and now for merlin's real battle...
wryter501 chapter 27 . 5/9/2014
interesting how you turned the magic-suppressing manacles into weapons - that'll put a damper on merlin's all-powerful magic... and the fight gets interesting. : )
wryter501 chapter 26 . 5/9/2014
i do so like the ending of this chapter - do the unexpected much, merlin? : )
wryter501 chapter 24 . 5/9/2014
arthur is fairly damsel-in-distress now, isn't he? i'd have liked to see him plotting, scheming, trying to escape, etc. that said, i think it's interesting that you've turned their roles around a bit. usually arthur is the one organizing the army and planning the attack...
wryter501 chapter 20 . 5/9/2014
so that spell on agravaine was dark magic! and merlin did it in obedience to arthur - but did arthur understand what he was asking merlin to do?... i would think merlin wouldn't do dark magic merely because he feared for his life, but if arthur asked him - that's going to be a different story, every time.
wryter501 chapter 19 . 5/8/2014
i like merlin being what? head of the camelot underground railroad? : )
ah, percival and elyan... and gwen will be back in camelot, soon... i'm a little nervous over the visions that morgana saw, that merlin saw, how it will actually play out...
wryter501 chapter 18 . 5/8/2014
when morgana's taunting arthur, i wanted him to ram excalibur (because she doesn't know it can kill her, yet) right through her - only, this fic isn't even half over, is it... no such luck, at least not yet...
and how has celyn resisted?
wryter501 chapter 17 . 5/8/2014
oh, poor arthur... i like him knowing somehow it's not true, being (temporarily?) free of the fomorroh's control... but i'm worried about them keeping the arrow with merlin's blood on it...
wryter501 chapter 16 . 5/8/2014
i like merlin physically exhausted and magically repressed but still using magic to protect himself and gwaine - only i rather thought that storm would have washed out all possible scent trail (even if they're in the same clearing)... i know arthur(fomorroh) isn't using common sense per se in this hunt, but it might be nice to hear the knights telling him the dogs are useless after the rain, unless/until they come across a new trail? it would be excellent if the storm is morgana-caused, and ends up being the reason merlin and gwaine are able to escape arthur and the fomorroh... :)
wryter501 chapter 15 . 5/7/2014
this chapter was - complicated. i like arthur seizing control, i like him feeling betrayed... though i might have liked to attribute some of his stiff reaction to merlin to trying to stay in control? like he's too busy concentrating on that to really think through anything but the surface implications?
i have to say, i'm surprised at arthur wanting agravaine enchanted... he's gone from being in a position of enforcing a ban on magic to remembering and using what seems to me quite a dark form of it (on a bad guy, granted, but still)...
and merlin's reaction of feeling that ruthlessness and pride, i'm a little worried about that as well... seems like that sort of (dark?) magic would prove a temptation... i mean, controlling someone's mind - isn't that what morgana's doing with arthur? ends vs. means, you know?
i would have expected something like the cave scene, where agravaine tries for a stabbing only to be tossed away (dead or not, maybe doesn't matter)... i mean, if merlin's leaving, why have agravaine enchanted to dispose of the manacles, if arthur/fomorroh knows where they're going to end up? it's not like they're hidden out of his reach, then... it's just kind of an ooc moment for both arthur and merlin...
wryter501 chapter 14 . 5/7/2014
so if arthur&fomorroh know that merlin is emrys, why is he talking to agravaine like him and merlin are still going out looking for emrys?... oh, i see, it was a jump back in time - your two sections here are switched chronologically?
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