Reviews for A Master of Two Servants
DragonInferno18 chapter 34 . 9/9/2016
I totally agree with you on there being no "simple good" or "simple evil".
DragonInferno18 chapter 33 . 9/9/2016
This is an EPIC story. Truly. Epic. And very high quality too!
mizzymel chapter 38 . 11/23/2015
I want to read this so bad, but it's been left without update for a very long time and I try not to read WIPs, specifically abandoned ones. But I couldn't help it, so I read it anyway. Please continue this.
FateOfChaos chapter 16 . 12/5/2014
Such suspense! I love it! It keeps you on the edge of your seat! This was a lovely chapter; can't wait for the next one!
wryter501 chapter 38 . 5/9/2014
is this the ending, then? you haven't marked it complete... it's kind of interesting to read how other authors on this site view the idea of destiny/prophecy...
wryter501 chapter 35 . 5/9/2014
it's an interesting conundrum that i don't remember seeing another writer address - the complications of making merlin court sorcerer. it's really not a simple appointment, is it...
wryter501 chapter 29 . 5/9/2014
lightning is impressive, but i don't believe we saw enough bamf!emrys in the series, not like this!
oh, dear, and now for merlin's real battle...
wryter501 chapter 27 . 5/9/2014
interesting how you turned the magic-suppressing manacles into weapons - that'll put a damper on merlin's all-powerful magic... and the fight gets interesting. : )
wryter501 chapter 26 . 5/9/2014
i do so like the ending of this chapter - do the unexpected much, merlin? : )
wryter501 chapter 24 . 5/9/2014
arthur is fairly damsel-in-distress now, isn't he? i'd have liked to see him plotting, scheming, trying to escape, etc. that said, i think it's interesting that you've turned their roles around a bit. usually arthur is the one organizing the army and planning the attack...
wryter501 chapter 20 . 5/9/2014
so that spell on agravaine was dark magic! and merlin did it in obedience to arthur - but did arthur understand what he was asking merlin to do?... i would think merlin wouldn't do dark magic merely because he feared for his life, but if arthur asked him - that's going to be a different story, every time.
wryter501 chapter 19 . 5/8/2014
i like merlin being what? head of the camelot underground railroad? : )
ah, percival and elyan... and gwen will be back in camelot, soon... i'm a little nervous over the visions that morgana saw, that merlin saw, how it will actually play out...
wryter501 chapter 18 . 5/8/2014
when morgana's taunting arthur, i wanted him to ram excalibur (because she doesn't know it can kill her, yet) right through her - only, this fic isn't even half over, is it... no such luck, at least not yet...
and how has celyn resisted?
wryter501 chapter 17 . 5/8/2014
oh, poor arthur... i like him knowing somehow it's not true, being (temporarily?) free of the fomorroh's control... but i'm worried about them keeping the arrow with merlin's blood on it...
wryter501 chapter 16 . 5/8/2014
i like merlin physically exhausted and magically repressed but still using magic to protect himself and gwaine - only i rather thought that storm would have washed out all possible scent trail (even if they're in the same clearing)... i know arthur(fomorroh) isn't using common sense per se in this hunt, but it might be nice to hear the knights telling him the dogs are useless after the rain, unless/until they come across a new trail? it would be excellent if the storm is morgana-caused, and ends up being the reason merlin and gwaine are able to escape arthur and the fomorroh... :)
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