|Reviews for Ready Player Three|
| monserrat.moreno.961 chapter 33 . 2/4
I know its been a while but I would love to hear what happens next in this story.
| Dusk-deerfluff chapter 33 . 2/13/2016
Are you ever going to update again...?
| ShiftFrame chapter 33 . 8/12/2015
... you kinda seem dead.
you know, not updating in 2 years...
| Guest chapter 33 . 5/20/2014
There's no sex in this!
| dalek chapter 33 . 11/4/2013
thank goodness you're not dead! XD also, when is the next chapter going to be posted?
| alexia1012 chapter 33 . 10/30/2013
Yay good luck and happy anniversy!
| AnonymousZGirl chapter 33 . 10/19/2013
Hi its me again I hope you do keep making Chapters for this story and all so your Who Framed Roger RAbbit Story too.
and any way I all so hope that Jenna will be able to get back on the Computer as soon as she can and all so it is nice you are helping her :)
and I hope she tells the person off who said that awful lie about her and got me worried sick for her.
but besides that I hope you like the idea of a AU Ready Player Three and a AU The Fleischer Files.
and all so I wanted to say I hope you like the idea of the names Lully, Jeni and Ally that can be your OCs that could have the same personalities and could be in the AU Ready Player THree and AU The Fleischer Files.
But then I thought one of the Names should be matched more with the original
Like 'Ally' I should of Said Ali instead cause it matches Alicia's Name more because A.l.i are the three letters from Alicia and well...
I guess its better that its Lully, Jeni and Ali.
and I Don't know why but the name Lully makes me think of the word Lily.
all so I really am afraid that your giving up on this story and I'm Really Afraid that you might give up on The Fleischer Files and I really hope you don't and I hope you like the idea of Cooltown City and Eddie getting a Letter from his brother.
and I hope you don't concluded this so soon and I know I had begged you in my last comments but its not because of mine or others OCs who haven't yet appeared and some all ready have that isn't the reason.
The Big Reason is that we love this story and I hope you don't Concluded it so soon...
all so I hope you update The Fleischer Files some time but I guess I could wait a little longer for that.
But if you do like the idea of Your own OCs Taking your place in a AU The Fleischer Files and AU Ready Player Three Story that are called Lully, Ali and Jeni.
I hope you do like that idea...
and all so I do hope to see the Series of One-shots but I got to wonder why you want to Conclude this story any way? I don't know if me begging you not to conclude this story so soon will be enough but I do hope you do like the idea of your own OCs Lully, Ali and Jeni being in a Roger Rabbit Story even if you feel it shouldn't be a AU The Fleischer Files...
and Possibly go by a different title..
but I Really do hope even though you do concluded this story and I can't help but feel Sad that you are cause I was really looking forward to seeing more CHapters of this story...and I hope you change your mind about Concluding so soon..
and any way I hope you update The Fleischer Files when you can and i hope the ideas about Teddy Being a live and is now a Toon and living in Cooltown City and sending a letter to Eddie is a good idea for The Fleischer Files and I guess the one Teddy could send with the letter could be Sleazy who could work for Teddy.
The Same Weasel from Roger Rabbit's Car Toon Spin that is known by Fans as 'Sleazy'.
I Can't help but think that Sleazy from Roger Rabbit's Car Toon Spin would be a perfect choice to take Teddy's Letter to Eddie.
even though I never been to Roger Rabbit's Car Toon Spin and I only saw it on the Computer like Youtube and pictures of it on other sites it does seem interesting even with the New Weasel that the Fans call Sleazy.
I hope you like that idea about Sleazy being the one to give Eddie the letter from his Brother.
and I Can't help but think if Sleazy meets the Toon Patrol that Smarty would Force him to join them and he might end up joining them any way..
any way I do hope you do like that idea...
and I'm not sure if you will change your mind about concluding this story but I Really hope you do though I don't know what the out come will be but I do hope to see the one-shots.
any way I hope that Jenna will be able to use a computer again and that she is doing well.
any way I will wait for CHapter 34 to comment again and I hope you all are doing okay and I hope Jenna will be able to have a Computer back and again I think it is very nice of you to help her with that and I wish you the best of luck
| AnonymousZGirl chapter 33 . 10/18/2013
Hi I think this makes my Second Comments on this '33' But I just had to do this cause I want to Beg you and plead with you Not to Give up on this Story We All love this story so much and I Love this Story and all so The Fleischer Files and I really Really Truly Badly want to see the Next Chapter of The Fleischer Files So I am begging you and Pleading you Not to End these stories in a Concluding.
I don't want to Cry in sadness over a great story being ended so soon and plus everyone will be sad as well...
I have been going through a lot of sad stuff lately and even though I try to be happy in front of my friends I can't help but get sad and sure I tell them half time I am sad but then the other half I don't bother saying to them I'm sad...
and right now as I write this comment I can feel myself crying in sadness and now my fingers are shaking as I stop typing I can see them shake a little...Man this happen the other day ago when I saw something one my friends wrote and it made me so upset and sad and as I type a message to her my hands were shaking...
and to think of you ending this story and possibly the The Fleischer Files story too has got me Sad and has me crying and has my fingers shake...I don't think that they use to do that when I was upset but then again I guess I never notice it before until now...
So Please I am Begging you Not to give up on Your Stories and it has been Months since you updated on The Fleischer Files and I really want to read what happens next and more Chapters to come :(
and if this is about you your boyfriend and how he might feel about putting yourself in a story you should know that it shouldn't make you think you should stop.
Just tell yourself that the Lulu in this story and The Fleischer Files story and the other stories that you maybe the same but over time this Lulu on the story has become something more like a new character and if you feel that you should make another story that changes the characters names that could be Lully, Jeni and Ally That Could work they could be Your, Jenna and Alicia OCs to take your Places in a second Stories of a AU Ready Player Three and all so a AU The Fleischer Files.
You can still keep The Fleischer Files and The Ready Player Three on here too.
it will just give you AU Stories of Ready Player Three and AU Fleischer Files.
and I know you know that Alternate Universe is AU.
So Please I hope you do that idea of the AU Ready Player Three and AU Fleischer Files.
and in the AU Ready Player Three and AU Fleischer Files the Characters that could be your, Alicia and Jenna's OCs that are named after you but only called different.
like Lully that is named after you.
Jeni that is name after Jenna.
and Ally that is Name after Alicia.
Please Please Please Please Don't Give up on Ready Player Three and The Fleischer Files.
I had fallen in Love with those two stories and I Don't want to see them end.
and Please Consider a AU Ready Player Three and AU Fleischer Files that has your own OCs that could be named after you three Name Lully, Jeni and Ally...
you can even give me Credit and Thanks for coming up for the idea.
Just Please Don't Give Up on this Story and don't Concluded it so soon I don't want to see it end and I don't want to see The Fleischer Files Not have a Future in a new chapter too I want to see what happens next on this Story and all so the Fleischer Files.
So Please Please Please Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase Please Please Please Please Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase Don't Give up on this story and Don't give up The Fleischer Files I don't want anymore Heartbreak then I do right now so Please Don't Give up..
I had all ready been worried for Both you and Jenna and even more so when when that Person said about Jenna and I all most believed it.
and plus if you end this story too soon the others who gave you ideas of using there OCs in the story will be sad that you didn't do it and I'm sure you will but my OCs Never Got in one chapter on here even after I showed you what they look like from DA site and I don't want you to give up and I know I don't Mind waiting for my Own OCs to appear in some Chapter in this story which ever it might be.
But I will be Greatly Upset and might go into a Crying fit if you gave up on this story and I don't want you to give up on The Fleischer Files either...
So Please I Am Begging you Don't End this Story and don't End The Fleischer Files I had Been Waiting and Waiting For Months for Both of This Story and The Fleischer Files to be Updated...
you can all so Make a AU Ready Player Three and AU the Fleischer Files With Your own OCs taking your Place that is Lully, Jeni and Ally.
I Am Begging you So Much and Pleading you Not To End This story or The Fleischer Files :(
| AnonymousZGirl chapter 33 . 10/18/2013
I'm glad to hear this cause what that person said in the review really got me upset and I was starting to believe them.
I'm happy that Jenna is okay and I shouldn't believe what that person said cause it got me upset.
Bu doesn't Concluding mean bringing to a close or final? :(
I can't believe it and I had been waiting for months for new chapter and even though I don't mind waiting and I know my OCs I said you could use in it Months ago could be in the story but haven't been it it yet and I know some OCs of others have been in in some chapters that belong to others
and I really don't want to see this story end so soon...
I mean the one-shots sound interesting but I really don't like the idea of this story ending so soon and I Really Really Wanted to Read a next chapter of The Fleischer Files.
and I was hoping they be more chapters to come after Judge Doom was Dipped.
I really hope you change your mind and keep writing chapters of this story..
I had just woke up from a nice nap and I am just seeing this...
I will make another Journal to say the good news about Jenna and all so I hope to read the next chapter soon but even if it takes a few days I don't mind and as for that Anonymous Reader who said that awful thing that made me believe it...Well if Jenna was to update her story I think I want her to have a little words with that Anonymous Reader for getting another Anonymous person Worried Sick...
I am going to make a another Journal to say the good news about Jenna and I hope that Person will learn not to pull such a awful thing again and making us all most believe it.
Please Keep up the Awesome Job on this story and all so the The Fleischer Files.
Cause I Love to read those two stories and I really want to see what happens next in each of them and I hope you change your mind about Concluding it cause I don't want to see it brought to a close.
| AnonymousZGirl chapter 32 . 10/17/2013
Hi I just want to say I was so happy to hear from you when you left me a Message on DA and told me you will be updating as soon a you can even though the last message I send on here was before I saw the Message but any way I can't wait to see not just my OCs in which ever chapters they will be in but all so I can't wait to see others OCs too and all so what Chapter 33 will bring :)
so again I was happy to hear from you and I just wanted to make sure you know I had posted that last comment before I knew about the message you send but I guess You all ready knew that.
any way I hope to see another Chapter of your Who Framed Roger Rabbit Story.
and plus I had this short story on DA and I all so posted it on Quotev.
and in one part of it it talks about marvin Acme ending up in Cool world as a Doodle or Toon.
The Title is The Arrest of Eddie Valiant and Justice for Weasels.
you can find that story on DA of course too :)
you see if Holli would killed Frank Harris in the movie of Cool World and she was a Doodle when she did it it would seem more sense that if that since Judge Doom was really a Toon that when he killed Teddy Valiant, Marvin Acme and R.K. Maroon they ended up in Cool World as Toons/Doodles.
do you think Cool World could be like behind a Large Wall all most outside Toontown? I Can't help but feel that if that was in the fleischer files.
but wouldn't the Cool World in that story be called Cooltown? or Cool City? then again I guess Cooltown City would work better.
I hope you like the idea of Cooltown City for Fleischer Files :)
and again Keep up the Awesome Job on your stories and all so again it was very great to hear from you
| AnonymousZGirl chapter 32 . 10/17/2013
Hi I hope that some one got my message on DA about contacting you I had just found out when I was looking up stuff and I saw this website that has a person that is Called Lulu Calliope and I think it was you and I Can't help but feel that it is you and plus I want you to read this Journal cause it shows my feelings about the matter on what the Anonymous Reader said About Jenna in the Story that is called Behind Closet Doors and that person comment is on top of mine my comment is on the bottom of that person cause I got by AnonymousZGirl...
and what that person said really shocked me and well...I am really worried and afraid what they said might be true...
and if it is true I want you to keep writing this story and all so The Fleischer Files.
Don't Just do it for me or for others...But Do it For Jenna because I want her to be Honored and I'm sure she would of wanted you to keep writing if what that person said might be true and I'm starting to be afraid that it is and I want to try to be a friend to you by trying to give you this information because I feel you have a right to know and you should keep writing for Jenna.
here look at this link and read it it explains all my feelings
I wrote that Journal to ask people to help find you because I wasn't sure if the Lulu Calliope on the is you or not and if it was I wanted to give you the message because I believe you shouldn't give up on your stories and you should keep Jenna's Memory alive and keep writing stories with you, Alicia and her in it to keep her memory alive...
so Please Read your Reviews soon cause this is important and please read whats on the link to my journal cause it is important and I feel sad about what I Heard on that review and I really am afraid what that person said might be true and if it is I want you to keep writing to keep the Memory of Jenna Alive in your Heart and for Everyone who feels your pain...
I know whats it like to loose some one..it hurts a lot and I don't want you to give up i believe in you and I want you to keep writing and Write Chapter 33 for Jenna.
Please I am Begging you do it for Jenna...man now I am crying again...it all so says I'm crying in my journal too and I was crying because of that News I heard about Jenna and my Worries and now as I write this I am crying again...so Please Keep Jenna's Memory alive by keep writing stories with her, you and Alicia in it cause I believe that her Memory should live on in your stories
So Please Read this and all so my Journal soon...cause I have been worried sick and I don't want you to give up and I want you to keep writing stories with you, Alicia and Jenna in it to Honor Jenna.
| AnonymousZGirl chapter 32 . 10/16/2013
Hi its me again...
I just want to say I hope that what that person said in that review in that story of behind closet doors that is a Monster Inc Story and I haven't read all of it yet and I had only got to I don't know if it was three or two but when I left a comment on it and I went to look at the review I saw what this one person wrote about Jenna and it got me panic and I'm thinking that it can't be true and I'm afraid what they said might be true and if it is I hope you keep writing in her memory just in case and if it turns out not to be true and it is some kinda sick joke I hope you keep writing...
so please don't give up.
maybe we will find out if the rumors are true or not later on...
| AnonymousZGirl chapter 32 . 10/16/2013
I just heard a awful rumor about Jenna...it can't be true...
I just don't want to believe it...I mean I've been so Worried for the Both of you and to read what some one said in one of her stories...I just to read her reviews cause I wanted to see if anything or anyone said anything and well...
Please if you happen to see the review that is the story Behind Closet Doors of her Monsters Inc Story...Don't do anything to hurt yourself in any way cause I dont' know if it is true or not or if that person got there facts wrong and I'm not sure if it is true or not but I am worried for the both of you and if she is...
well if you do happen to read this comment I want you to do me a favor...
Write Chapter 33 Soon not just for me or for others But for Jenna Keep writing all the Chapters for jenna don't let any bad memories get you down and Please Keep Writing for Jenna Dont' just do it for us but do it for Jenna...
and I Pray that those are just rumors and I hope it isn't true and if it is true...I want you to keep writing for her memory in case it is true...
don't do anything to hurt yourself I want you to live on and keep writing for her Memory in case that awful rumor is true on what that person said in the review and I really hope it isn't true...cause I had so much worries right now it bothers me and with one of my friends thinking about...I just can't take another worry and sad news.
So Please Write Chapter 33 to honor Jenna! I'm Begging you to do it for her and keep Writing Chapters Please I'm Begging you I have been going through so much pain today and I want you to keep writing and I hope some one emails cause I'm not sure if I can email you or not or even if my email can go through but in any case I want you to keep writing this story and your other story too...
Not just For me or the others who read this...
But do it For Jenna...
please don't give up...
| AnonymousZGirl chapter 32 . 10/15/2013
Okay I really hope everything is okay and your Dad isn't keeping you from the computer cause I can't help but feel worried.
and all so as for x-the Devil's Advocate-x who now goes by Psychedelic Hurricane on here.
I Think the reason why she is busy because she has been writing some fanfiction on her own and the fanfiction she has that I am reading but I only had time to read only a little of it and I haven't went to the next chapter of it yet and it is VERY Long though I'm sure I don't mind I just wanted to take my time before I read the next chapter which I Think I only read two chapters so I might be able to read the next chapter Later on when I can...
but This is Important I did message you before on the DA but you haven't replied yet and I am getting worried and I guess perhaps the reason is because your Dad is keeping you from the computer and I Hope that he lets you back on it soon.
and all so Please talk with Jenna and please if you two are fighting cause I can't help but worry about that possibility and I really hope it isn't that cause I really hope everything is okay between you two so please at least send her a private message cause I can't help but worry about if you two are fighting and I really hope it isn't that and I'm sure everyone else is getting worried too
so please if you want to ask Jenna why she hasn't been able to comment
and I don't know if she is Psychedelic Hurricane or not or I am really mistaking them for being the same person and I don't really know and I'm not sure anymore...
so Please PLEASE email her when you can and ask her if she is okay cause I can't help but worry
and even if the next chapter might take a Year later I guess I don't mind as long as you two Are Okay and aren't Fighting cause I can't help but Worry
| dalek chapter 32 . 9/5/2013
I got my laptop back.