|Reviews for Intertwine|
| Law77 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
When will be the next chapter released?
I'm kinda getting impatient already and that I was worried that you somehow died in an accident or whatever the hell has been keeping you busy...
| IllyasvielEmiya chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Its still confuse me how Mikoto just ignoring Illya/Shirou presence and still keep tried to beating Touma's ass. Huh...I Guess she is Ignorant Lad, eh? its good written story and honestly I like it. Still, A rewrite-edit of the scene is too much for me. You can write your own right? With Shirou's PoV, Its weird to read a similar paragraph in original Light Novel with PoV3. Okay, you edit it, but not much.
Let me guess, You are not let Illya/Shirou in Touma room because there will be index, right?
| Misaka 20.001 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
its amaze me how mikoto ignoring shirou when she have a talk with touma.
| Phearo chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
I'm guessing you probably won't update this ever again.
| Kiseki no Tenshi chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Great start! :D Please write more soon!
| A Certain Unfortunate Guy chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Pretty cool! Reading this story is like seeing the misfortune going away... Hope you continue this.
| FlyingDeLorean chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Heaven's Failure is always amusing. Is there any chance of this being continued later on?
| kenegi chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Yay someone finally picked this up. I know you said that Shirou was going to be pocket but I highly doubt Shirou would use the cutesy route to get info. Also why not stick with her original name that was given to her by Rin?
| elis21 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
More please :)
| Engineer4Ever chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
must have more, this going to be so funny!
| Yami Arashi chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
awesome! I'm definitely looking forward for more! Nice Idea!
| ElPsyCongroo chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
| RnD chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Hmmm.. wouldn't Touma's arm effect Shiro/Illya's body too?
Either the structure, circuits or what not.
Anyway, like the story, not much of a fan of loli's but its ok
| lostmagic564 chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Awesome i dont mind if its so just as long as
it doesnt die. Really enjoyed that and i really liked the parts were they thought he was a child
| Rc1212 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
AWESOME to see this continued!
I look forward to seeing more!