|Reviews for Intertwine|
| ZE Bri-0n chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
Your ideas of what constitutes a Level 4 and Level 5 are wrong. Level 4s are powerful enough to have tactical value, and Level 5s are powerful enough to overpower normal militaries.
| Grizzmon chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
| AoiKishi chapter 1 . 3/10/2015
this is brilliant.
do u plan to countinue this fic?
| Dare bear chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
I can not wait wait for the next chapter this story is a very unique twist on the fanfiction crossover I hope you continue this story. If you don't I am going to have a sad face. But it's your choice to continue or not.
Emilya rock and knows how to play cute and intimidating to people
Please update this soon
| GGFBank chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Shirou with Iliya body&some of her personality meet with harem breaker Touma? That's what Zelretch call funny!
Still wonder will Emiya have to get punched before add to harem lol
| Crimson Dragon Emperor chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Type your review here...
| Law77 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
When will be the next chapter released?
I'm kinda getting impatient already and that I was worried that you somehow died in an accident or whatever the hell has been keeping you busy...
| IllyasvielEmiya chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Its still confuse me how Mikoto just ignoring Illya/Shirou presence and still keep tried to beating Touma's ass. Huh...I Guess she is Ignorant Lad, eh? its good written story and honestly I like it. Still, A rewrite-edit of the scene is too much for me. You can write your own right? With Shirou's PoV, Its weird to read a similar paragraph in original Light Novel with PoV3. Okay, you edit it, but not much.
Let me guess, You are not let Illya/Shirou in Touma room because there will be index, right?
| Misaka 20.001 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
its amaze me how mikoto ignoring shirou when she have a talk with touma.
| Phearo chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
I'm guessing you probably won't update this ever again.
| Kiseki no Tenshi chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Great start! :D Please write more soon!
| A Certain Unfortunate Guy chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Pretty cool! Reading this story is like seeing the misfortune going away... Hope you continue this.
| FlyingDeLorean chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Heaven's Failure is always amusing. Is there any chance of this being continued later on?
| kenegi chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Yay someone finally picked this up. I know you said that Shirou was going to be pocket but I highly doubt Shirou would use the cutesy route to get info. Also why not stick with her original name that was given to her by Rin?
| elis21 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
More please :)