|Reviews for Between Worlds: The Madness of One|
| guest chapter 9 . 8/1
Kind of weird so many people just accepted that he called himself Lord Potter.
Even if you take into account that many of them are from the wizarding world, they are still children. Even if you say they are mature/educated enough to understand politics, they are not the Heads (Or even necessarily the next heads) of their own families, meaning they would need permission from their parents to make alliance decisions with a barely resurrected house of what many would assume to be a future dark lord (If you follow canon, there were many wizards/witches that thought Harry only beat V because Harry was a better dark wizard).
Neither Harry nor Dumbledore mentioned the theft of Harry's money. So... does D not know? Did the Goblins just take money from D's vaults to make up for the theft (because that would be wrong ethically for the Goblins to do since they are supposed to be a neutral third party). You would think D would try to convince H it was all for the best or something.
And pretty much, you only sent Harry to Hogwarts so he could have a scene in Hogwarts where a new house is made, he because the Heir of Merlin (Staff included), and make lots of political alliances with 11 yr olds...
| guest chapter 8 . 8/1
Have you ever been to a lake?
10 LAPS around a lake in ONE hour? Is Harry the flash?
The average sized lake would take HOURS to go around. Plus, doesn't a good portion of the lake border wooded areas(forbidden forest) that would be harder to get through? So, Harry would have to be dodging trees and running along sand at 6 a.m... and he finished before breakfast...
And James set aside 1 mil for OotP/Dumbledore to use, then Harry finds out 25 mil has been stolen by Dumbledore... then Harry decides to give Dumbledore 2 mil instead of 1, but he wants the other funds back... Why? Demand 25 mil back and don't give the 1 mil (claim it is interest for a 10 yr loan of 25 mil), or demand 24 mil back and leave the 1 mil as your father asked. Who in their right mind would willingly give extra money to someone who stole from the inheritance left by their deceased parents for years? And somehow, James and Lily didn't trust Dumbledore but still made him a trustee for the Potter vault to access funds...
It's nice that you made Petunia care about him, but it wasn't gradual at all. More like, oh wait, you're an innocent child I should love and take care of in place of my sister-here's a magic photo album. Why would she have that? She barely cared about him before that day (his 11th B-day), but she has a magical photo album of people she's hated for years... And then she's fine with suddenly delving completely into the magical world (which she has, again, hated for years).
I get that it's an OP!HARRY AU, but I really wish you'd toned down the buffs a little and not made it quite so obvious that this is a fanfic made just to make him OP. First he starts magic training way before others (acceptable with a good tutor), of course, since he doesn't have a wand it's all wandless magic (still ok). Then you make him the inheritor of two powerful bloodlines with magic rings that give bloodline knowledge of different magics (one should have been enough?). Then you give him estates and fortunes. And now he's also Merlin's apprentice/heir and Hogwarts now has a special house just for him? Not to mention the special staff and the thing with Fawkes.
It was just a bit too fast for me. He's still 11.
| MKaius chapter 17 . 8/3
I really tried powering through this story to see if it gets better, it does not. The more I read the worse it gets.
No character development at all, the only thing dark and powerful in this story so far are the sketchy descriptions of his posturing.
| MicroDime chapter 42 . 7/25
One of the biggest issues I have with this is how Steve is portrayed, he isn't needlessly aggressive and doesn't jump at shadows. Other than that it's a good story and I'm glad to see chapters of it.
| draco7347 chapter 46 . 7/10
really love this story cant wait for new chapters
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/4
Why would he give Dumbledore more money on top of what was left to him by his father. The man was stealing from him and his mother told him not to trust him. I also don't get the Hogwarts part as Headmaster it would be easy to use the founds how ever he wanted and just lie about what it was used for.
| ThomasNealy chapter 18 . 7/5
I have to admit I am lost on the Marvel side of the time line. there are several things that happened post Iron man that seem to be happening now like Stark Tower and the refined Arc reactors but other things seem to point to pre Iron Man time frame. Any help clarifying the Marvel side of the time line would wonderful.
| asingh123 chapter 16 . 7/4
Must say story has a unique beginning...
But to be honest, reading this story is like reading every 10 pages from a book, then leaving 50 pages in between, and then reading 10 more...
Especially since this Harry has more characterstics and abilities than the freaking pantheon... Nothing of his character or abilities explained...
Next, why the heck Hermione didn't apparate when she was in danger, since potter household was already compromised, why didn't harry immediately send his phoenix or go there himself...
Everybody was sitting in the house waiting for orders...sirius ... The twins...no body was ready after Hermione's call came...
And Most problematic... Harry's non chalance towards Hermione's SOS... Sure, Hermione didn't say anything back on the call even when he tried twice... Sure she is all right...I will wait, do everything, mobilize the forces, establish the wards, then try to protect my best friend... Who may or may not have been in danger since her call was abruptly cut...
Not even going to comment on Azazel Harry...ok one sentence...all pomp and show, no material... All that he did, all that lightning strikes, just caused property damage and harm to bystanders...
A demon leaving the one who has wronged him alive, but magic less... Is that it... What about people who burnt your friend on the freakin' stake...
Even a stable human with a knife would rip apart his/her enemy in that case...this is a demon we are talking abt...
Sigh... Such potencial in this story plot... But it wasn't utilized well...
| Silvermane1 chapter 46 . 6/29
| HowlnMadHowie chapter 46 . 6/29
Ah Thor 2 and IM3, both wrapped up together in one neat chapter. Though it's always nice to see Odin put in his place when he realizes he's not the biggest fish in the pond.
Oh and I see even though you had Harry order Tony and Pepper to seek Dobby to get out it's going to blow up in Tonys face bec Tony didn't listen. Now Pepper's gone off with Maya.
| Sabien chapter 46 . 6/29
Thanks for the chapter! Can't wait to see Odin's beat down hahaha
| Shaggy37 chapter 46 . 6/29
Outstanding chapter! So Harry's on the case of the Infinity stones and Thor 2 is happening litterally while Iron Man 3 is happening, check! I can't wait to see if Harry gets involved with the Guardians of the Galaxy next! Kidding aside will be seeing Harry and Loki helping Thor but without the threatening parts that the warriors three and lady sif do?
| Midnight Sin 009 chapter 46 . 6/29
I loved this chapter good work hope all is well with you :)
| goddragonking chapter 46 . 6/29
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
| shugokage chapter 46 . 6/29
Impressive chapter and scene!