Reviews for what goes aroudcomes around
xphrnzrjh chapter 3 . 6/30/2013
כבר חזרתי הביתה יכולת לשלוח לי! זה היה נותן לי משהו לעשות... האינטרנט עושה לנו בעיות וזה ממש מעצבן! בכל מקרה פרק טוב ונתראה מחר בהנדסאים :)
LiveYoungDieFast chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Good to see that you are attempting your own story, you made a good start. I didn’t notice any mistakes but if you’re worried about things like that you could always use a beta and sometimes people will politely point out mistakes, so you can change them.
Good luck and I’ll be waiting to see what you come up with.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
I think its cute too (the petnames). Enjoyin the story si far! Plz continue
guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
nice start..so keep up the good work! make it longer perhaps..especially since the space is not maximized..but yes,good start definitely.
SSA Musical chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Awsoeme!
awesomestgleek chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
I loved it:) can't wait to see where you'll take it. Great job, especially for your first fanfic;)