| Reviews for Never Saw It Coming |
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   Ski74 chapter 13 . 8/3/2013 Love it! Update soon, please? This is a great story! |
| EpitomeOfBella chapter 12 . 7/22/2013 I love it! The direction it is going is perfect |
| Mystical5erChild chapter 12 . 7/22/2013 Loved it! Love Delena24K7 xoxo |
| Brrpenguin chapter 12 . 7/20/2013 Such a clever cliff hanger. I can't wait for the action to start in Seattle! While this chapter was necessary I wish you would have added a little more fluster and flair to it. Can't wait to read what's next. |
| Ski74 chapter 12 . 7/17/2013 This is a great story! Love where it is heading! Update soon? |
| Brrpenguin chapter 11 . 7/16/2013 I love this chapter as well as chapter 10! Both were amazing and I can not wait till there is more to read! I would love for Bella and edward to fall in love during this bet trial period and the no boundaries rule makes it all the more interesting :) |
| sophia chapter 11 . 7/5/2013 I love this story, it's amazing! I can't wait till the next update. I always love it when a a story loves on a cliffhanger, pls update soon! |
| Mystical5erChild chapter 11 . 7/1/2013 This is amazing! |
| edwardluver1721 chapter 11 . 7/1/2013 Love the story so far can't wait the next update! |
| Scattycow chapter 5 . 6/30/2013 This makes no sense. BELLA DID NOT MAKE THE BET! She doesn't have to do anything he says. It's Alice who made the bet. Bella is not an extension of her, she is her own person. I'm all for a bit of fun but it's got to make sense. |
| Scattycow chapter 4 . 6/30/2013 Why is the Bella the one to be Edwards slave, when it's Alice that made the bet? It's Alice who should be the slave not Bella. She didn't bet Edward so she doesn't have to do it. Simple. |
| Scattycow chapter 2 . 6/30/2013 Bella just comes across as a bit pathetic here. if she is 'over him' she wouldn't be spying on him or singing silly revenge songs to him. If I were Mike I'd be smug in the fact that she obviously still loves him. |
| BffswBooks chapter 11 . 6/29/2013 This is really good, but please update more often. |
| Embrace1another chapter 10 . 6/11/2013 I love this story I can't wait to read more update soon it's a really great story! |
| sonnenblumeues chapter 9 . 6/3/2013 Loved this chapter. But I noticed you kept changing between present and past tense (e.g. paragraph 1 and 2). The rest was great. I wonder what Edward’s up to? ;D |