Reviews for Never Saw It Coming |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha poor bella :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool loving the story so far :) the songs fit perfectly in with each chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, he's up to something... xD Thanks for your PM! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's always good to know what's really going on by using both POVs, and of course, you're as good as ever. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm picturing Edward with green hair chasing Alice and Bella right now. xD I can't stop laughing! |
![]() ![]() Why do I feel like Edward has a hair style already picked out for Bella? This is really good and I can't wait for your next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, yeah.. this keeps getting very exciting. :D |
![]() ![]() All I can say is you don't normally see a story as cleverly written in AH form like this. So Bella is pretty much Edwards slave. I think he should take her out on a date or something. She did like him at one point, maybe she won't be so against it. Have fun with the dress part, I'd like to see you go a little crazy on that one :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! This I getting good! |
![]() ![]() i never read it until now a story like this, i mean is awesome,keep writting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Poor Bella. 4 weeks. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. :D If he likes her he could "force" her to go out with him - although that wouldn't be funny. Or maybe there's something she's really bad at; he could tell her to do it in front of the whole school. Hmm... no, sry. I'm too tired to think of anything good - and I'm not creative enough xD I hope you have lots of good ideas - hope you'll continue soon. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally sounds like Alice! Is she a psychic in your story, too or is she just ... Alice? :D I really liked the flashback. |
![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Bella. Times two. x)) Okay, so you didn't change or say anything about how Bella dresses, so I guess we're sticking to the original Bella who wears tees on jeans plus sweaters and all. I'm thinking about Edward making Bella wear a little more girlish clothes like knee-length dresses (oh, it'd be perfect with her cropped hair.) |