Reviews for Never Saw It Coming
PenguinCullen06 chapter 5 . 5/21/2013
Haha poor bella :D
PenguinCullen06 chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
Cool loving the story so far :) the songs fit perfectly in with each chapter! :)
sonnenblumeues chapter 7 . 5/16/2013
Oh, he's up to something... xD
Thanks for your PM! :-)
Catburglar25 chapter 7 . 5/6/2013
It's always good to know what's really going on by using both POVs, and of course, you're as good as ever. )
sonnenblumeues chapter 6 . 4/30/2013
I'm picturing Edward with green hair chasing Alice and Bella right now. xD I can't stop laughing!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/23/2013
Why do I feel like Edward has a hair style already picked out for Bella? This is really good and I can't wait for your next update
beccaavivianrose chapter 6 . 4/22/2013
update soon! :D
Catburglar25 chapter 6 . 4/21/2013
Oh, yeah.. this keeps getting very exciting. :D
Guest chapter 5 . 4/16/2013
All I can say is you don't normally see a story as cleverly written in AH form like this.
So Bella is pretty much Edwards slave. I think he should take her out on a date or something. She did like him at one point, maybe she won't be so against it.
Have fun with the dress part, I'd like to see you go a little crazy on that one :)
Team.Edward.Is.Love.17 chapter 5 . 4/16/2013
Update soon! This I getting good!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/14/2013
i never read it until now a story like this, i mean is awesome,keep writting
sonnenblumeues chapter 5 . 4/15/2013
Wow. Poor Bella. 4 weeks. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. :D
If he likes her he could "force" her to go out with him - although that wouldn't be funny. Or maybe there's something she's really bad at; he could tell her to do it in front of the whole school. Hmm... no, sry. I'm too tired to think of anything good - and I'm not creative enough xD
I hope you have lots of good ideas - hope you'll continue soon. :-)
sonnenblumeues chapter 3 . 4/15/2013
Totally sounds like Alice! Is she a psychic in your story, too or is she just ... Alice? :D I really liked the flashback.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/13/2013
awesome
Catburglar25 chapter 5 . 4/14/2013
Poor Bella. Times two. x))
Okay, so you didn't change or say anything about how Bella dresses, so I guess we're sticking to the original Bella who wears tees on jeans plus sweaters and all. I'm thinking about Edward making Bella wear a little more girlish clothes like knee-length dresses (oh, it'd be perfect with her cropped hair.)
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