| Reviews for Never Saw It Coming |
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   Catburglar25 chapter 4 . 4/14/2013 Oohh.. Poor Bella. :3 |
| Catburglar25 chapter 2 . 4/14/2013 Oh. My. God. This too hilarious! I've never imagine Bella and Rosalie singing like that, thanks to you, I have an idea now. ;) However, here's some things I found that might need a little attention- if you don't mind my proofreading, of course-: first, avoid redundancy, ("Alice pulled her yellow Porsche into the parking lot, and sure enough, her brother, Emmett's jeep was already in the parking lot." I think "Emmett's jeep was already THERE" would be better, and here's another "Friday night at The Hangout was karaoke night and since there wasn't a whole lot to do in Forks on a Friday night, this is where everybody would end up." You could replace the second 'Friday night' with 'night like this'.) second, you missed the 'I' on here "Rose and were trying not to laugh" So, that's it. Again, great story :) |
| RobstenLover93 chapter 5 . 4/14/2013 love the chapter please update soon! |
| Notinusedeletedaccountsorry chapter 4 . 4/13/2013 clifffhanger! lol, it would be so funny if she lost! |
| RobstenLover93 chapter 4 . 4/13/2013 I really need to know the time...is it after six? |
| Notinusedeletedaccountsorry chapter 3 . 4/11/2013 Ooh nice chapter! Drama! |
| sonnenblumeues chapter 2 . 4/9/2013 Cool chapter. The two songs are awesome. :-) Keep writing please. :D |
| Notinusedeletedaccountsorry chapter 2 . 4/8/2013 Lol! Jealousy! Great Chapter! |
| RobstenLover93 chapter 2 . 4/8/2013 love the chapter please update soon! again I knew both songs and I was really glad I did :) |
| sonnenblumeues chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 Hey! Sounds really good. I hope you'll continue soon! :D |
| Notinusedeletedaccountsorry chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 great chapter! you should continue! |
| RobstenLover93 chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 i love this song! Love the chapter :) |
| beccaavivianrose chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 nice story, keep writing! :D |
| Catburglar25 chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 Hi. Good one. You had a crazy idea for revenge, i like it. Though you might want to smooth your ending a little more. That's all, i guess. Keep writing. . |