We still waiting on that chapter. This is some real good story

Wow… absolutely wow. This chapter have me glad I kept reading when I wanted to stop. Wished you finished this story or at least continued

Kakashi used one of Naruto's shadow clones for the replacement technique

It's not that I dislike OCs in general, it's just that she is written in a way that is very generic and irrelevant.

I'm not a fan of these OCs tbh, you could've just used Ajisai/Suiren/etc.

I think Koran and naruto’s relationship isn’t that of lovers but parent and child, so I wouldn’t go with that pairing if I were you. This was really well written, but I wish Naruto didn’t have to get those piercings, because it makes me a bit queasy. But it makes sense considering everything.

This is great. I was a little apprehensive when you didn’t have Naruto leave ame for so long but it is turning out well. Hop you pick this up again soon. Would be a shame if abandoned

please continue

Plase update thor...

Sorry to bother you as I’m sure you are very busy and hard at work. But I absolutely had to inquire as to when the update for both of your stories would be released. (I absolutely love both of them) The best regards, and I hope you have a great number of breakthroughs and inspirations for your stories. :)

Interesting!
Cool would be something original, for example a Naruto that doesn't want to kill and fight, a bit like in Sage.
I'm looking forward to what you do with this.

Honestly thought Naruto would call the fool his real name; Obito.

Madara was not his favorite person right now.
Madara was his favorite person.
LOL!

update soon please this story is awesome

Good chapter, your way of looking at how the doujutsu work is very intresting, it was great insight to naruto training.