I have not actually watched or read 50 shades of Grey. So I was very disappointed when I looked it up and found out that both the Bingo Babes and the McGovern sisters are not Canon.

Damn, Kate's awesome. I mean, she is hot, confident, somehow able to afford designer shoes as a college student and softball state champion...

Oh God, It's my fourth time rereading and I've only just now noticed... Christian's an anti-vaxxer, isn't he?

This story sort of spiralled out of control toward the end there, but overall I enjoyed the heck out of it. Thanks for writing.

This is such fun!

damn. this is insane. but i loved it.

I loved this chapter!

Why didn t I discover this sooner?!

awesome

that was a bit extreme with the crying

Regarding my last review on Chapter 59; The McKenna subplot would be great as a another story but is, when combined with a fifty shades of Grey fanfiction, sometimes too much to take in.

I have a bit of constructive criticism. It'd be easier to understand the story if characters like Ron Jeffries, Everett Jeffries and general everyone on the McKenna side of this story got explained more.
Yes, some parts (like the phone call between one of the sisters and Christian) are intentionally confusing.
However, I did not actually know where Lena and the others came from. Are they OCs or are they from another story? Even an authors note would help.
Anyways, thanks for the amazing story and stay healthy!

How is it that Ana and Kate are normal (broke, I assume) students yet they can afford designer shoes? Like they have student loans to worry about.

Is Ana talking about gondolas? I don't know any other strange Italian method of transportation and since she didn't specify I assume it's not about a car.

Jose should be an Avenger. Also what exactly are genuine fake diamonds?