Reviews for Pitch Black
kykyxstandler chapter 12 . 7/2
this is an amazing story
and i know there is like zero chance of you updating since it's been years since you did but...
PLEASE update
this is too epic of a story not to live on
i soooooo wanted boone to live though so i'm kinda super sad about that
i wonder what you planned next
and i hope you'll update
i really love the way you write the characters and give them unique personalities and the likes
i think you're great
but i would really like for you to write more of this awesomy goodness that is your fic
and thank you
MyGazeAtMidnight chapter 8 . 12/2/2016
For Marines these characters seems weak and unbelievable. The story had a lot of potential but I just can't finish it.
Shadow12177 chapter 12 . 10/1/2015
Omg I am absolutely loving this story! Please keep it coming I can't wait for more :) I so knew that Boone was gonna die but it was still super sad. Also I loved that Lana punched Johns, made my day! :D
Riddicks-gurl1988 chapter 12 . 1/24/2015
So far I'm so into this story was kinda hoping that the sister and Boone would ease up off Lana and let her like Riddick he's not that bad of a guy when you get under him lol I meant get to know him...can't wait for the next update I'm anxious to see what happens next great work
sketchingnerd97 chapter 12 . 12/30/2014
Still no update on your stories? :(
FlowerChild23 chapter 12 . 10/3/2014
holy cow. more please. this is good.
sketchingnerd97 chapter 12 . 9/20/2014
Nooooo! Boone's dead! :'( but it was bound to happen. I love that you read and respond to our reviews, oh I feel so loved! :)
" oh my goodness I forgot I need to see if you updated your tmnt story! "
Okidoki bye bye!
shadowoftheblackdeat chapter 12 . 9/17/2014
Dang girl, leaving us hanging like that. No fair. good chappie, hope you update soon! -
Guest chapter 11 . 9/5/2014
I'm really confused. Why hasn't anyone busted out the healing potion. This might be the time to give some to Boone.
sketchingnerd97 chapter 12 . 9/3/2014
Oh thank goodness, it's good to know your still alive! Even though it's not a chapter its good to know we can be expecting one soon!
sketchingnerd97 chapter 11 . 8/30/2014
Hey! You haven't updated for more than over a month! That's a BIG NO NO! I thought you were back on track here! If serious stuff is happening in your personal life then all is forgiven BUT if not please please get back to this! "I'll be watching you, always watching." (In case you don't know where that's from its monsters inc.) ;D
deathincarnate65 chapter 11 . 7/24/2014
i started reading this a couple of hours ago and the first ch had me laughing and i could tell u were building something between lana and riddick. have johns mess with her one more time and get boone to sick riddick on him or lana herself maybe even aisha or all three at the same time that would be funny just to see johns' face if that happens sitting here laughing already. please take this into consideration i bet a few of ur readers are thinkin the same thing as me
sketchingnerd97 chapter 11 . 7/18/2014
Awww *sniffing* you m-mentioned me in your AU, your the first! I'm so happy your back, and ALIVE! It made me so happy to see this story updated, I was scared there for a second that your story was abandoned! Thank goodness that's not the case!(: It was a lovely chapter! I makes me sad about Boone, Wonder how that gonna turn out... Love how you portrayed Riddick in this one! Till next time!.
shadowoftheblackdeat chapter 11 . 7/16/2014
Aww, Riddick doesn't know what to do with his feelings, how sad XD ROFLMAO
Ahem, back to business... *takes a deep breath* I LIKE THE CHAPPIE! And I must say that it, indeed, took ya long enough. Almost thought you had forgotten about us, US! Your faithful readers TT

So update sooner or else I'm coming after you, steal all your chocolate and torture you with my pitchfork! *pulls out a pitchfork out of nowhere*... And it was good, hope Boony dies soon, with all the blood he's losing, Jack having her first PMS and Lana bleeding from her wounds, kinda makes them an even bigger target than from the movies. In the movies it's just Jack bleeding, in your story it's Jack, Boony AND Lana. It would no doubt lure more bioraptors towards the group... maybe you can interpret that in your story? Since those things are "attracted to blood" as they said in the movie, there would be more bioraptors prowling around them and maybe when Paris gets attacked they at the same time grab Boony and eat him alive? It would certainly make a difference in the story. Bring some tears up and such :)

Anyway, hope you update SOONER, I don't wanna wait another Century before your next update, I'll be a granny by that time and I wanna enjoy your story before I turn old and wrinkly.
dragynfyre18 chapter 11 . 7/15/2014
I was thinking about this fic the other day, wondering if you were ever going to come back. I am so glad that you posted a new chapter. It was pretty awesome. Cant wait for the next one :)
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