Reviews for Lord of the Rings: The Spartan Prophecy
LuciLucifer chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
I am going to read this fic, but before that I have to say I read on your profile of your 'future' fics and just...Mass Effect x Lord of the Rings: Spectre of the Ring omfg yes please this would be the best fucking thing ever fem!Shep kicking motherfucking ass dfhsdjfhskjdf...*cough* Ok off to read now buh bye :D
ToaGaimZXA chapter 18 . 6/3/2015
This has been an remarkably awesome story!
AraelDranoth chapter 3 . 4/30/2015
Everyone hop in the pelican, fly to mordor, drop ring in lava, story over. ;)

It's like the Eagle Theory man!
Luminatrix chapter 4 . 4/14/2015
Not to undermine this fantastic story ... but couldn't the Master Chief just use the Pelicon to transport Frodo and the others directly into Mordor and deposit the ring straight into Mount Doom :D
Guest chapter 18 . 2/26/2015
This is honestly probably the best crossover I've ever read. Thank you so much for writing this.
ddan chapter 18 . 2/10/2015
Fuckin awesome story man you should make a small sequel to it when chief returns to middle earth and maybe make it that somehow he becomes immortal and Cortana is somehow given a real body until then keep up the good work and thank you and they become somehow entangled in a new quest
iamnotlordvoldemort chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
I like the idea of the story so far. My only difficulty is with the present tense narration. I get that you may be purposefully using the present simple tense, but when writing prose in english, you really need to use past simple if you want it to be readable. An example of this is "And yes the weapons systems for the other Pelican are the same." Certain says. By using the word says, instead of said, you imply that the action happened continuously rather than chronologically. I personally just find it very difficult to read mostly because I have spent so many years reading things written with the past tense, not because the sentences are poorly written or anything.
SomebodyRandom chapter 18 . 1/26/2015
So you managed to combine the LOTR trilogy and the HALO universe into eighteen pages, each considered chapters individually and mix up the storyline with excellent literature in words and storyline add ins. The result: CRITICALY ACCLAIMED WORK OF ART!
Lord Razer chapter 18 . 1/9/2015
I don't want to seem mean or flame but this entire story is just basically master chief taking all the glory and curb stomping everything, I mean the scene with the kicking rock scene was really exaggerated master chief despite being stronger than the average human could not do something like that. but this does have good grammar that most other stories lack.
JumpingToaster chapter 18 . 1/7/2015
A straightforward combination of the two series. Not spectacular but still entertaining and worth checking out.
Guest chapter 18 . 11/25/2014
beautiful glorious majestic
James Ryan chapter 18 . 10/28/2014
Thus ending the great journey in Middle Earth.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/15/2014
make a movie
Guest chapter 18 . 10/7/2014
sugoi amazing glorious lovely beautiful hallelujah
Guest chapter 18 . 9/28/2014
lovly story i loved how you added the covenant it didn't have to much fighting or to much talking i loved that you had long chapters
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