Reviews for Lord of the Rings: The Spartan Prophecy
Jebest4781 chapter 18 . 9/7/2014
this was a great ending to a great story man, keep it up on your other stories since this was fucking awesome
Jebest4781 chapter 17 . 9/7/2014
man this was absolutely epic man, great job
Composer777 chapter 18 . 9/7/2014
And thus, did your tribute to the saga that is Lord of the Rings end!

Whilst it had its flaws, it was a great and inventive read. It was you (alongside free man writer of course!) that inspired me to write my own cross with Halo.
You are a pioneer, never forget that! You made the story work, and incorporated major elements from both lore's.

My only criticism would be that your style of writing is quite basic, which didn't make it too easy to finish. A basic writing style can become a boring one at times. But despite this, seriously well done! I wasn't expecting this to get finished so it was a lovely surprise to see.

I did notice that you're dialogue has improved since I first looked. You're not just swapping over lines from the film, which is extremely lazy! Conversations are dynamic things, and the entry of an additional person into one can change a dialogue's progression massively. I can actually track a learning curve over the course of the story. This is excellent to see. :)

Keep up the good work, and never stop learning. Work, write, improve. Good luck in all that you do in the future.

Composer out!
darck ben chapter 18 . 9/7/2014
This was a great story
Khalthar chapter 18 . 9/6/2014
And now comes the days of the Spartans...
FireheartNinja chapter 18 . 9/6/2014
Yay! I loved the ending! Thank you for a wonderful story! It was nice to follow!
edboy4926 chapter 18 . 9/6/2014
Great ending.
Congrats on finally finishing this story.
New Universe Returns chapter 18 . 9/6/2014
I love this story, and I love the ending. Never thought this would end so quickly.
Boobymitch chapter 18 . 9/6/2014
Amazing, this is without of a doubt one of my favorite stories, and from one writer to another, will u check out some of my newest books and give ur opinion on them via pm
edboy4926 chapter 17 . 9/6/2014
Awesome chapter
Yeah, they won.
ItsDaKoolaidDude chapter 18 . 9/6/2014
Never mind, it was a double upload!
ItsDaKoolaidDude chapter 17 . 9/6/2014
Huh, coulda sworn there was a double upload... Either way, awesome chapter!
Colossal the Omega chapter 16 . 8/13/2014
Please continue the story. I like this to see how it ends and how they defeat Sauron once and for all.
zzz chapter 16 . 7/29/2014
please do chapter 17 and 18
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
please do chapter 17.
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