Reviews for Lord of the Rings: The Spartan Prophecy
Composer777 chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Not bad, just try to engage the reader a little more, more description, paint a picture, stimulate the reader Apart from that your very good. : )
angryjaws chapter 15 . 10/6/2013
Legolas needs to take down a scrarab.
New Universe Returns chapter 15 . 10/1/2013
When will the next arc, The Return of the King begins? I hope that UNSC will be able to locate Middle-Earth and send out many fleets or armada to the planet.

When the UNSC came; the tides of the war will turn, and a new age dawns upon Middle-Earth.
Guest chapter 15 . 9/30/2013
really amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
amazing
Arekanderu chapter 15 . 9/30/2013
I really like the idea of your story but for god's sake why WHY WHY do you write in present tense!? It's absolutely and utterly horrible and makes reading your story a chore instead of the pure enjoyment it should be. Please for the love of all gods rewrite the story in past tense the way it should be
Anquietas chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
Awesome, keep it coming.
Daisy-023 chapter 15 . 9/23/2013
Come. ON already!
SkyCaptain502 chapter 7 . 9/21/2013
One thing caught my attention: according to the book The Fall of Reach, John-117 was born in 2511, the UNSC-Covanent war ended in 2553, 42 years later. Unless the Spartans have some sort of age regression I havn't been made aware of, looking "early to mid twenties" is a bit of a stretch.
FireheartNinja chapter 15 . 9/20/2013
So epic... Can't wait for the net chapter!
Seren Avro Tsukino chapter 15 . 9/20/2013
coooooool...
edboy4926 chapter 15 . 9/20/2013
Awesome chapter.
The battle has finally begun.
Dracconnis chapter 15 . 9/20/2013
Loved it!An action-packed update
ItsDaKoolaidDude chapter 15 . 9/20/2013
Great Chapter.
OBSERVER01 chapter 15 . 9/20/2013
good chapter
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