OMG LOL I love this fic. It's definitely a side to Yami I would love to see more! Of course if everyone knew he was this much of a jerk, he (or Yuugi) wouldn't have any more friends.

Anyway write more chapters soon!

"I'M BEING STOLEN!" Hehe! I just found that part funny. _ So, is that really what all the Millennium Items do if they were stolen? And I really liked DAY THIRTY. That was funny...Heck, the whole fic's funny! Update soon! _

i hope u feel special, cuz i logged on to reveiw this. go you! anyways i really love all your chappies, its such a hilarous story.(yeah, yugi is most definitly paranoid, but not paranoid enough not to give is puzzle to a stranger with candy...hum...)

DD

heheheehhehe this is great! Please continue! It's realy funny. Sorry my spelling's off. - This is going on my fav. stories list

This is good! I really like it! _ Keep it up!

"We won. Yippee. Went home after that. Bought the pen." *lol* I see by that juxtaposition exactly how important Yami's excursion in the virtual reality world was to him. Hey, that sentence had three x's in it. Go me.

"I almost had him believing there *were* no thieves in Ancient Egypt, until he asked Ryou Bakura." *lol* Poor Yugi! He's so naive! What a doll. Ignore me, I have a thing for doe-eyed child-like characters. OOps, that sounded wrong. I mean my maternal instinct kicks in in a major way. Yeah...moving on... O;

"I *told* you, he's running a monopoly here! It's...it's evil! And limiting!" O Oh, hey, do you think you'll get to the Battle City arc? Silly question, it contains 'Marik' - those are probably the chapters you'll have the most enthusiasm for. .~ But anyway. There's actually a scene on Yami's 'date' with Tea where he buys cards from a shop other than Grandpa Motou's (I cannot spell that name for some reason; please pardon me if I got it wrong!) Just thought I'd remind you in case you wanted to integrate it into the fic. _

"The duel was broadcast, live, around the world. That should have been a warning, but no." *LOL* Capitals to show the extra hilarity, because seems to have this thing against multiple exclamation marks lately. That 'around the world' thing always did crack me up though. The dub does seem fond of overexaggeration. O

Other lines I liked: "Was tempted to pull of "Duke's mask, since I suspected it was Kaiba underneath, but Yugi wouldn't let me." "And if he won, I'd never, ever, for as long as I lived, play Duel Monsters again. Am dead, so I accepted." "Where did he get "heart points" from? That guy plays up too much to his cheerleaders." All cute/hilarious! O!

This is long (which risks being pointless). Never fear, you're saved by the Yu-Gi-Oh episode coming on in three minutes. Yugi in a Dark Magician outfit - maximum cuteness. *.* Thanks for all your recent updates. Will review more later!

(P.s. I _so_ had this written up last night, but either or my computer gave me problems submitting it... -;)

hehehe! I noticed two weeks earlier that bandit keith's abbrev. is Burger King _ hahahaha!

that was so great! i haven't been able to read this story for quite a while due to college and work. keep up the good work, i really love your fics, you inspire my writing. if you ever get a chance please check out my ygo easter fic, it would mean so much to me.

lolol, continue!

Good chapter! Please tell me if their are going to be any pairings!

(Laughs insanely) That was really good! Having Yami's 'no monopoly' ideal was a very original spin on the D&DM thingy. Very cool. I like how you've stuck the match itself into summary form because I found those episodes quite tedious. Anyway, keep the snarky bitching streak and update asap!

Borath ;p

i love this story, it just cracks me up!best part in the whole story was went yami had to gochange is underwear in the shadow realm!

DD

Wow! I love this fic! Kepp going, it's SO funny!

hi i love your stuff

great chap its wonderful

ceep writing its halerius please please please

hahahaha! i love it! keep writing! _