This is really funny. I always thought that the clown looking thing was some sorta fat gay clown...or something. I wish you would've included something about them always saying, "A ghost of a chance..."

But, it was still very good!

write more chapters will you. they are really funny and really good.

(hugging her sides giggling ridiculously) This story is so funny, it should be illegal! (still cracking up) My dad was staring at me strangely, since I'm wearing a pink... yes the dreadful pink robe (only because it's warm or I would've burned it ages ago) And giggling like a hyena! I like this Atemu better! xDD! Write more whenever you can! _

these diary entries of Yami Yugi (Atem) are really good, keep up the good work, update the new ones, like before he separates from Yugi and all those interesting parts

Hi your Yami Yugi's Diary thingy-me-bob-thing is so cool! I just love reading it again and again and again and again and again etc. anyway, I love Yami's sarcastic attitude. It's really funny and no-one knows what the heck I'm laughing about. I keep annoying my brothers cos I read it out loud and get over-dramatic, especially at the Kaibo bits. Kaiba is cool but he's also very fun to make fun of. Anywho, keep up the good work and update soon, cos otherwise, my brothers will get even MORE sick of me reading the same thing over. bye bye!

I had a good laugh. Thanks for writing it.

I simply loved the part in the 1-st chappie, where Yami Yugi thought out a way how to introduce himself in class _

I love the way this story is written. Is it just me or are you channeling Bridget Jones a little bit? It's not a bad thing, it actually makes it quite effective. I love the choppy sentences omitting personal pronouns because of the implied subject (" Am still the best" ) They're very effective in conveying the whole diary feel. You make Yami's seem quite funny at times. looking forward to seeing more chappies. _

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Very funny fic, Pachelbel! It was really cleverly done. I can't think of anything to say against it, which is rather impressive for me. Instead, let me just quote back to you some of my favorite scenes, as doing so will make me feel more responsive than just saying "great!"

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Dragon plan failing, on account of stupid 'no flying cards allowed in maze field' rule. Also, enemy team has something very bad, very big, and very powerful, but it doesn't compare to Exodia. I don't know what their monster is called; wasn't paying attention, was too sick with worry over my Exodia cards lost somewhere at the bottom of ocean. Missing Exodia so bad, will now risk Dark Magician, as losing should show Yugi fraction of how mad I am at him for letting someone touch Exodia.

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I'm not sure whether that's IC or not, but it's definitely one of my favorite parts of my *own* characterization of Yami. I have some similar scenes in As If! (a MSTing/bloopers fic of the show, as compared to a summary like this - I feel like I remember your name from a review of it, but I wouldn't swear to it, especially not to you yourself), and it really strikes me as how Yami *should* be, even if he *isn't.*

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Have had a few 'insights' into the life of Kaiba. For one thing, what in all that exists under Ra is he doing playing Duel Monsters? If I were as tall and lurpish as him, I wouldn't waste my time with cards (also assuming if was as tall as him, would be ignorant to dangers of Duel Monsters). I'd go play basketball. He's taller than the backboard! Some people just fall into the wrong career.

Secondly, what is with his coat? Is it a coat? Seems familiar somehow. ...Ah! Hoop skirt, from the 1890's! Yes, or was it called a bustle? Hahahahaha! He's wearing a half-skirt! Deduction: Kaiba is insecure about his butt.

Aw...that's so cute! He's got a locket! Shaped like a card! I bet it's a picture of him having Christmas with his Blue Eyes White Dragons. Am so glad have better life than him, and I live in a necklace.

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Also, his inner child beats him up.

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*dead* *just... dead*

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What do I have to do to be good enough for these morons anyway? Do I really care what they think?

...Pains me to say it...Care what Yugi thinks...Or I did, up until today when he tried to turn into a hero and ended up losing all my work. So degrading; I've never, ever, ever been beaten. Ever. Not in battle, not in games, not in war, not in-

Tea is yelling at Kaibo...! She says that while Kaibo won a 'lousy' game, Yugi has friends. Yugi has a heart.

Sniffle, me too...sure, it may not work anymore, being dead, and according to Yugi it's a shriveled black raisin, but it's still there...

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I don't know whether you meant that as him being actually sad or him being sarcastically sad, but either way, I love it. (I can just imagine him rolling his eyes and sighing at the "Yugi says it's a shriveled black raisin" part. So funny!)

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Now for good news, which I desperately need. Tea somehow beat Mai. I don't know how. Think that she let Tea win...in which case, my gratitude goes up while my respect goes down. WAY down. How could she let herself be beat by a card named 'Shining Friendship', especially after the headache we all got from Tea's long...long lecture on the 'benefits and strengths' of real friends? (Tend to agree with Mai on theory of Duelists Fend For Selves. Except Yugi...I fend for me and Yugi, but as I live in his jewelry and his body, think that am entitled to duel for him.)

So, Yugi finished internal struggle (more or less. Don't see signs of struggle, as was not fighting with him, was trying to ignore him, but whatever). Tea beat Mai and gave Yugi the star chips, and we went to watch Kaiba and Pegasus duel.

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*loves the gratitude/respect bit, the "I fend for me and Yugi, but as I live in his jewelry and his body, think that am entitled to duel for him" bit, and the "Don't see signs of struggle, as was not fighting with him, was trying to ignore him, but whatever" bit*

Yugi takes what moral victories he can, can't he? Heh! XD

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DAY SEVENTEEN:

Is not actually a 'new day' in that the sun has not actually set or risen since I last wrote, but being Pharaoh have decided Day Sixteen was getting much too long, and we need a new day. On to the duel!

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I wish I had been clever enough to stick something like that in As If!. 'nuff said.

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*from much, much later, just to show I also like the more recent stuff*

Anyway, then we noticed a bunch of flashy lights and loud music, and went to see some guys slapping their feet on little glow pads.

Tea took over my "duelist spirit" and offered to beat the winner. I wondered how she intended to do that, as she's not exactly a great game player, when she began stripping, tossed her coat right on my head. Caught her jacket and demanded to know what she was doing, but she only said she was going to "teach this guy what real dancing's all about!" Which sounded pretty incriminating if you ask me.

Prepared myself to tackle her and wrestle her clothes back on, but fortunately she stopped taking things off before I had to.

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I showed this bit to a nice Catholic boy. He didn't seem to find it anywhere near as funny as I did... pity.

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I'd keep quoting, but this is getting quite long... besides which, that was the majority of what I quoted to friends before they told me to shut up (I know it's annoying to quote fics, but this was just so funny I had to share!), and I'm really too lazy to go back through and find more quotes. In any case, though, this was really very fun to read! I enjoyed it quite a large amount. _

(By the way, I found this story through Edmondia Dantes's favorite stories, so you can thank her for that!)

LMAO! So cute XD

humf tea , *drags yami off the set* P

*looks for cute litte yugi* Hello wut am i typeing?-. sorry waz daydreaming again heh heh -,-; me likey teh story type more!

demented wolf out

z it geting late and im geting sleepy-.- *yawns while clutches yami plush*does he like mai now? but that's joyes job...z -_-

DW OUT

uwa? HE LOVES YUGI WATHER HE WANTS TO OR NOT! but i mean who dosn't? he's too cute for his own ra damned good!oh ra ya got to love him ;) and yami too! *blush* I. DID. NOT. TYPE. THAT!

demented wolf out

sigh still no love life but in the last chap he sounded a little concerned when the grave robber tryed to ahem "touch" him a yami/yugi pairing?;)

*sigh* no love life? wut is up with that