Reviews for Tenth Street
mille libri chapter 1 . 10/15/2017
This is a really nice call-back to the other story, using Gina's past and her existing attitudes to show her experience with the Reapers. Chilling, really, but an unsurprising and rather fitting end for her.
11thCommandment chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
"The noise in her head starts to form words"- i like this line. A gradual return to clarity. What happened to her dad on Mars? I need a crash course.
Well set up.
Knightfall1138 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Great to see this character again after NEW FRIENDS! Gina's voice really comes through in the narrative, and getting the perspective of an "average" character who would've been out on the streets at the time of the invasion was interesting. Not knowing exactly what these creatures are, but knowing they're corrupted versions of familiar aliens: that was a nice touch. Great consistency there.

Excellent work!
skywalker05 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Nice job showing the invasion through a minor character's eyes and making her the hero of her own story. That last line and the description of the Star Child was creepy. Your voice for Gina, angry and unsophisticated, worked well to tell who she is. Good job!