Reviews for Extracting Fear Effectively
thejellyfish99 chapter 1 . 3/21
this story was awesome just soooo amazing its soo good will you continue this story at all i would definitly read more of this story loved it so much
Aliece Fatin chapter 1 . 3/19
decent writing but the psychology is sub-par and i get that when your immortal logic is out the window but there seems to be unbelievable concepts.
2manyfandomstho chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Wow, this was really good. I don't think its bad that you enjoyed writing it, sometimes you just feel the need for different material, I was in a stage for a while when all that I read was real dark angst stuff like this, ad now I'm still kind of in it but its petering out. I'm thinking I'm going to go read your Within the Confines of the Mind fic because that is what lead me here.
Thanks for writing, I'll probably take a look at some of your other fics :) You're great.
Lexi chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
I think this was one of the most epic fanfics of RotG I've ever read. You should do like a sequel type thing where Pitch fulfills his threats. I would LOVE that! I've been reading so many fanfics like this (darker and involve Pitch scaring Jack almost to death), and I just want, no, NEED more!
Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
A very good take on a serious interaction between the two. It is wonderful to find good, cruel torture without turning to smut nowadays. Your oneshot was a good comparison next to the prior one with humor and Jack's version if fun. Now I look forward to an even darker tale with your next story.
OreoFanservice chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I really enjoyed this story! It was well written and I loved the whole psychological horror aspect that Pitch made Jack go through and how Jack really unraveled by the end. Awesome job!
criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Okay, wow. This is just mind-blowingly amazing. Seriously. You're awesome. This is so well-written, so in-character, so PERFECT. I can't even put into words how much I love this. It was just... amazing. You captured the darkness of Pitch's character so well, the fear and the tension with Jack and I got shivers reading this. It was just fantastic and wonderful and brilliantly written and just so perfect. I absolutely love this. It's just... It's perfect. So perfect. I keep saying that, but really, truly, it is. It's perfect.
rabbah chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Wow, I loved this; you did a great job on it. The only thing that bothered me was that your writing felt a bit... stiff, I guess, in the beginning, but it felt more relaxed later on, so it's all good.
unknownkyitty chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
This was awesome! Glad I read it.
Dariahn chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
oh. now that was something truly delicious that left me feeling rather content with so much Jack's fear to taste.
excellent, I must remark.
Receive my gratitude, you did well.
in future, I would like to read more of your serious stories.
best regards.
Heracratzarism chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
This was awesome! I wish the movie had more of that, too, but oh well. Amazing story! :D
lewela chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I definitely fell in love with that story!
It was really perfect how you presented Jack's emotions, his fear and sadness. I like when authors shows him as a lost little boy. I like the way he reacts for Pitch and how scared of his touch he is. The last scene was brilliant! I look forward for the next chapter and I think it can become one of my favorite stories.
livingwithbooks chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
this is really good! i love how you portrayed the characters.
can't wait to see more stories from you!