I have always been a huge fan of Lilo and Stitch. Your story was amazing. I love how you set the story before the accident. You did a great job writing in the characters voices. I really hope you continue with this story.

I wouldn't mind seeing where you take this story. Please continue!

I remember the little doll. It's a nice backstory you gave it. And their sisterly bond is adorable and accurately portrayed.

Pleaseweeee keep this going! Its a great idea and so far it's fantastic

I love this so far! I've been wanting a good story touching on this subject for quite a while, and I really like your style of writing. You've captured the characters really well, and I just can't wait for more. Please update soon!

Oooh, I hope you keep this up! I really love the original movie, especially the bond between the two sisters and the backstory, and so far this is exactly in-character and cute, and I can't wait to see how you take us through the rest of the tragedy. Keep it up!