Great read. You did a wonderful job: well written, good flow, great Soul, and enjoyable and realistic SoMa. Stumbled into this piece by accident and happy I did.

Very nice. You balanced Soul's tendancy to be fiercely protective without him losing his gentleness.

Smut is hard, but this was so fucking hot! I loved this! Very nicely done! Those emotions were just so perfect, and Soul definitely knows how to eat his girl out! Fantastic job!

:3 love this. Realllylky want a sequel

I now, smut seems easy then you try to write it.

Great story.

oh my this is very much sexy

Smut is hard! You did a good job though! Better than I couldve done, thats or sure!

All that difficulty pays off my friend. That was very very good smut.

That was so adorable! You did wonderfully!

O.o That's it?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...need a part 2 needs a part 2!

continuation? there has to be more than this! onegai!? who was the weapon? does soul find out ever? so many things left unanswered! .

I thought this was so cute. I think you did a good job :)

Oh, I am so glad you wrote a story where Soul is in control; you do it as wonderfully as your Maka ones! Because when Soul is in control... I don't know, he seems to become even more hot than usual! *faints* Also, I love the way you describe his delicious skin in every story you make.
Thanxs! :) :p ;)

Very nice. You did well.