|Reviews for Moments in Time|
| LouiseKurylo chapter 22 . 8h ago
If only. Good twist. Enjoyed the set of 22. Varied. Interesting. Thanks.
| LouiseKurylo chapter 3 . 8h ago
Oooh! Sneaky! And cute.
| Miss Peg chapter 15 . 6/26/2013
I like the balance between dialogue and prose, it works well and Jane sounds so much in pain - both emotional and physical. I hope the groan from Lisbon isn't a sign that she's hurt too. :( Please, Lisbon, let Jane know you're okay.
I should probably go back and read through the ones between my reviews, I decided after the first few that I should go for random ones and not in order, not sure why, lol.
| Miss Peg chapter 13 . 6/26/2013
Oh this is wonderful, the title is naturally perfect for it and the way you've written it is great. I've noticed you missed a few full stops, though that's relatively minor. I would be tempted to make the last two lines the same order as the lines above, though the last line works that way around! It's a conundrum, lol. It reminds me a little of a poem I once read that was very much He said, She said, kind of. It was a great poem and this is a great piece.
| Miss Peg chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
LOL! Can't teach a girl a trick and not expect her to have a go! I know you're writing them as drabbles but I think this pieces could have benefitted from being a longer piece and had a bit more prose in between the speech, particularly in the earlier part. But I did enjoy it, it had such a fun feel that made me smile!
| Miss Peg chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
I like that Lisbon is being all protective over him! Maybe next time have another read over to check for any erros as I think you forgot a couple of speech marks. Jane is such a wimp when it comes to guns, though I probably would be too, Bless him!
| Miss Peg chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Haha, that is rather funny. Oh Lisbon, try and do a good thing! Flying cherries are definitely a winner.
| tromana chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Very silly. Not quite in character in my opinion - mostly due to the silliness - but I'm glad to see you are taking the definition of 'drabble' seriously unlike many fanfiction writers.
| mentafan chapter 22 . 6/2/2013
THESE DRABBLES WERE THE BEST FROM WHAT I'VE READ SO FAR.
IT'S AMAZING TO SEE YOUR ABILITY TO CAPITIVATE SO MANY EMOTIONS IN SUCH A SHORT STORY.
EACH STORY STANDS OUT FOR ITS OWN AND IT WAS EXTREMELY DELIGTFUL TO READ IT.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR GIVING ME THE PLEASURE OF READING IT. I ENJOYED EACH AND EVERY BIT :D
| I Dream of Scotty chapter 22 . 5/2/2013
Nice one to end on. I really enjoyed these drabbles. :-)
| Mossi.b chapter 22 . 5/2/2013
Lovely, just lovely.
I have really enjoyed these little stories, each one, small but complete, and very well written.
I look forward to seeing these in my in box as I just know that I will enjoy them, sad to see an end to the series, but looking forward to your next series, and indeed your next longer story.
Thanks for all the fun
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
A very neat conclusion !
| Jane Doe51 chapter 22 . 5/2/2013
And this is the best distraction ever ! Now they have all the time they want to be distracted by each other !
I'm looking forward to your next collection !
| Lalalupin chapter 22 . 5/1/2013
Oh gosh, this was a great conclusion to an awesome set of drabbles. Loved them all :)
| Sue Shay chapter 22 . 5/1/2013
Got him! Free at last!