|Reviews for While your lips are still red (RuUSUK)|
| bearru chapter 10 . 1/7
This fanfic is really good! I have never come across a RusUSUK fic, but wow, I really did like it! Your plot is really good, the idea of having mythical beings like vampires, werewolf's and witches with zombies. I'm in love. It's sad to see that you don't actualize since aug 2013, but I'm still following it! I hope to see more. (:
(sorry for my atrocious english, I'm still learning, it's not my first language)
| Kay-Mentrae chapter 10 . 11/8/2013
...Wow... Just wow!
This story is Absolutely amazeing! I mean I just randomly stumped across it by chance, but holy FrUk is this thing awesome!
Ok, first off, the plot is fantastic! I'm a big fangirl of RusAme but also a fan of both UsUk and RuUk so this is like my ultimate Ot3 here, but its not Just a Yaoi threesome, you also have the underlying twists to the characters as well as the amazeing world you've set them in! I love the mystery that is Alfred and Ivan's pasts together as well as the beautiful heart breaking bond he shares with Arthur! And the comic bits as well as his Wolf side, which I think is positively brilliant! Especially being its a Seprate being all on its own.
The dark magic their all facing is daunting, and I rather liked that twisted creature you had Alfred face, I have to wonder exactly what is in that package he has that such things would want it so badly...
And now that the three have come to an agreement it's going to be extreamly intresting to watch them try to get along while fighting over Alfie X3
Plus, your lovely little smut scenes are amazeing! I love the way you write them, it comes off as so sexy with out the vulgarity a lot of smut tends to be! Or perhaps that's the wrong word? Well anyways, the point is it is some of the best bloody well written Yaoi I have ever seen! I have high hopes for this story! As well as extreame excitement for the next chapter! I can't wait to see who the great 'Prince' is going to be :3
Your newest follower and fan-
| Sesi and Siku Braginskaya chapter 10 . 8/26/2013
Again my dear as beautiful and eloquent as always:D
It makes me pleasure smile to see that you updated.
| GreenAppleAddiction chapter 9 . 7/23/2013
I was really excited when I saw an update. Did not expect it to be pure smut, but I can't really complain. Damn, that was hot!
Keep up the good work. :)
| Sesi and Siku Braginskaya chapter 9 . 7/23/2013
That was beautiful. Absolute poetry my dear. Please keep up the good work!
| Scotia chapter 8 . 7/18/2013
I will admit that I've never been a fan of Russia/America but I'm really enjoying your story and can't wait till your next update :D
| GreenAppleAddiction chapter 8 . 7/18/2013
I began reading this when it was intended as purely RusAme, but I'm starting to like this version better. Much more drama. x) Quick question though; is the other pairing USUK or UKUS? I was hoping for UKUS, but it looks like it's the other way. Still happy as long as they're together though. :)
I'm really loving the RusAme in this, and I'm curious about Alfred's past self. Clever plot there. Can't wait to see how things turn out. Please update soon!
| kingdomheartslover13 chapter 6 . 7/10/2013
You're right, this version is better. However I did find a few mistakes. For one, Arthur called Ivan, Ms. and you used sense instead of since when Ivan was addressing Alfred of his long absence. Just a few things I noticed. I hope it helps.
| Sesi and Siku Braginskaya chapter 6 . 7/10/2013
Quick note: polish last names end with an I instead of a Y so you are in a sense calling Russia Poland. His proper last name should end with a Y. I'm Russian so of course I learned this sort of thing forever ago. And at some point you called him .
And wow! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
| KitsuneMagic48 chapter 5 . 4/9/2013
Omg that was so interesting!
| shadowshearts chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Sounds interesting I hope you will update this. I'm glad to see something with my ot3 in it:)