|Reviews for Not quite dessert|
| Insane-Lane chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Ohhh France, would you like some ice for that BURN!?
| Animechan123 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
hahaha omg this is amazing and so cute :D well done
| RIVILvFv chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Oh god really Arthur? That was a funny way to end it an it just captures Francis an Arthur's relationship so well it is something they would do trying to beat each other at whose bigger and better and sex is definitely a topic they would cover. Awesome and nosebleed worthy
| TwentyThreeSecondsToSunrise chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
xDDD I loveddd that!
(Exspecially the end!))
| daaaawwwww chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Arthurs line at the end was perfect!
| UnlockmyHeartforLife chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
GABBY. NO GABBY. YOU ARE FOURTEEN GABBY. STOP READING LEMONS GABBY.
*looks around all sneakily, then favorites and slides away on floor*
| LittlexMissxPsycho chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
So perfect XD and I love England's comment at the end
| Raven G. Black chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Hello! I'm Raven. I'm writing to you because I write a Hetalia Couples React to Rated M Fanfictions, and I have chosen yours to do a reaction to! This is the perfect combination of mind-scarring Rated M-ness and comedy, so it will be perfect for the characters to read and react to. If you want to see what they said, this is the link to my FanFiction: s/9221177/1/Hetalia-Couples-React-to-Rated-M-Fanfi ctions
The reaction to yours is chapter 4.
Raven G. Black
| TheOneAndOnly-K chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Bananas are bigger than crepes are they not?
That line cracked me up xD
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
| LyckyDycky chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Ending was priceless
| Reia-Tsukimi chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
omg that was friggen amazing ! please write more! like hat night Francis tries to remind Mattie what happened! PLEASE!
| Illead chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
That really amused me. I'm glad I read it.
Love and rainbows,
| Loreyulia chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Yes, all the yes in the world! I really love France's outwardly coy, and antagonistic nature towards England. But that line at the end, "Aren't Banana's bigger then Crepes?" Oh lawrdy, I cracked up so hard, I was all like, "He's gonna need a burn heal for that one." (Pokemon reference ftw). So cute/sexy/hilarious for only 900 something words. I don't think I found any spelling errors, which was good. Over all, a really great piece of humorous smut.