|Reviews for Prism|
| 6468282994747482 chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
I, uh, I'll be the first to admit that I have a really difficult time with Katarina/Garen, mostly because I don't know what kind of challenge Garen can provide mentally to Kat. But this is one of the most beautiful pieces of writing I've ever read, and when I read it over, and over, and over again, I can feel the twisting miasma of emotions that Lux must feel, except hers must be a thousand times stronger. I can feel the strange, twisted, and yet innocent love that she feels for her brother; I can feel Katarina's pain and confusion. I can imagine what position Garen would hold in the heart of a young girl, abandoned by her family, with only the image of an older brother to look up to. And to lose that brother, that beacon to another woman... Ah, it's poignant.
But perhaps most of all, I can feel the invisible thread that connects and has connected Lux and Katarina from the moment Katarina first kills her on the 'Rift. It is Lux who chooses Katarina's pendant; Katarina who wears it, and I can feel that they are inextricably tied, not only by this tragedy but by something that neither can put words to. It's Lux that Katarina goes to. And Lux is fascinated.
My god, what you've done here is embodied Hemingway's Iceberg Theory, and employed it with such remarkable skill that the pathos it's elicited is still lingering. I hope you see this review and never stop writing because you've got a gift.
| hungergamesfan77 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
Omg that was so beautiful I'm gonna die from feels
| Dante chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Seriously why would you make a fanfic with one chapter but the chapter is reall long seriously you can just write a fanfic make multiple chapters bet with the same story you wrote because it's so boring to see so many words at one chapter atleast try to make 3 or 2 dayum people so tryhard
P.S.:I don't wan to judge someone like this jeez but i appreciate your work it helped me kill some time
| InsanityRunsInMyBlood chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I literally whimpered when I read this.
Gods, I hate this so much, but I can't help but love it. Cheesy, I know. Jesus christ what is it with you writers and Lux and Kat. The pendant. Ugh. That last sentence. My heart. It's like Lux blasted me with Final Spark the same time Kat unleashed her Death Lotus plus Garen's bloody Demacian Justice. Bye-bye Me. I'm gone. I'm dead. Congratulations you killed me.
*takes a deep breath*
YOU KILLED GAREN AND THEN YOU HAD THE AUDACITY TO WRITE THAT LAST PART?
Okay, I'm done.
(The point is, this is a straight favourite. My heartstrings have been tugged and then cut. Beautiful piece.)
| La Ragazza Drago chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
| Xitaris chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
you .. you horribly fantastic man/woman/creature!
please have all of my shipping babies in the world. i love a story where a character death is used in a brilliant way and i'm also glad i came to reread in a browser because.. apparently phone's don't show the break lines.
do you have any idea how confused i was? lol
this story is so breathtaking and you portrate Kat so well! you even inspired me to doodle a bit of my own, geezes. i'll be posting a doodles section shortly so if you're curious you can check that out , i'll credit you for sure and tell everyone to read this -w-
| Flying Turtle of Freedom chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Feels.. Almost every possible feeling rushed to me while reading this,
It's well written and just the right amount of words and description.
I love Lux and Garen , in a way that while reading this , every emotion that Lux felt i felt too, it's just so well written like that.
It's sad , in a good way.
You're awesome , keep writing!
| Arcantos the Storyteller chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
A sad, bitter tale...
Through there is a few things to note that is that friendly fire isn't possible, and I'm pretty sure the summoners control most of the actions of the Champion in battle.
| Lady Caitlyn Crowne chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
That was deep. I loved every single part of it.
Hope to read more from you soon!
| leimaR chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Hgyuuuuuuuuuuuu. I can't really use any positive descriptive words for your work...cause it was achingly sad...*sniffles* T.T
How to interpret in 3 words: It was beautiful.
| Aoriki Matsumaru chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Holy jeebus. This story was really interesting and how you bonded Lux and Garen (till everything went down on Lux). I really liked it and look forward to more from you.