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its been a cupple years still come back here sometimes and i love how you basically said fuck you to the haters

I know this is an older and completed story but the Kyuubi influencing out of no where doesn’t at all fit in with the story. There was not a single mention of them having any contact at all b4 this.

Supposed to be Naruto x kurenai not Naruto x Haku
This story sucked sorry.

I do not like that he met Danzo so early. That old warmonger is a weirdo that has no business around children. In a different way than Orochimaru

Even the third reads that Pervy smut. Geez ️️️

The plot had really great potential… that said. The way the story was handled was terrible. The arcs were a mess and I found myself hard pressed to really care about the characters. Nearly everything felt forced and rushed despite being over 500k words. This story could have been done better with half that amount. The plot really had promise, this story could do with a rewrite excluding all the forced plot points and cringe dialogue.

While the plot has promise you’re trying way too hard. The story feels forced and stale. You’ve essentially just cloned Itachi and named the clone Naruto.

bro your fanfic is so sick this naruto is accurate to the Uchihas Being crazy because of the sharingan sheessssh..

I must say this is like the mass effect ending quite interesting

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I would just like to say, in the actual story kakashi is 5'9"

this really good

RIP

All readers ! my best friend the author of this fan fic is no more with us , he lost his battle to cancer, he was fking noob.. GG .. fk man...I hope he can see my comment from heaven... Bruh if u r seeing my comment , just wanted to say one thing "You Shitty Classic Author" xD .. bruh RIP. will miss you a lot.