Reviews for The Sharingan Devil |
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![]() ![]() I agree 100% with you mini rant |
![]() ![]() naruto-my dream is to bring peace to this world kurenai-peace? naruto-yes, a world where children slit slightly fewer throats |
![]() ![]() oooooooooooooooooooooh he said pissed mommyyyyy. im kidding i never understood what was wrong with that word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() na I'm out i hate danzo sorry you're fic is great but I'm not going to go on |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read "you can do it hinata" in my head I think (poor sakura) |
![]() ![]() ![]() so he will have a proper heros journey and not be a marry sue cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is naruto really forgetting his literally biggest ally he has Which is kurama Kurama would know about what danzo told him and more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this kurama He’s like a clingy gf |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aight that is too much He is literally stating shinobi rules about keeping emotions in check while fighting max taijutsu power because sasuke insulted his friends |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you want a smart character Please dont make him literally do what he said 5 minutes ago He said ‘shinobi should not show their emotions on the battlefield’ something along those lines at least that is what he was implying |
![]() ![]() ![]() The excuse of a ‘revolt in the village’ is a weak excuse on why hiruzen cannot kill danzo He actually wouldn’t really be well known too It would only cause a revolt if danzo was popular and people actually liked him Even then ninja villages are not a democracy or anything else if he had the daimyo’s support then he theoretically could do almost anything And even without his support konoha is technically a millitary dictatorship Since hiruzen already knows that the root are ongoing he could capture danzo and get a yamanaka |
![]() ![]() ![]() please tell me you have given some sort of path to yakumo in the chapters ahead |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe this third time I'm listening to this fic I love this fic so muchhh after namikaze legend: Rise of the empire then I'll re listen this |
![]() ![]() I swear this guy and his cliffhangers. Other than that I think this is a really good fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() another thing I want to comment is that not all stories would be of your expectations as it's human nature to want what they "want" now listen even if all stories aren't your expectations they can still be *developed to become a part of your expectations* sometimes a story can be so good that it doesn't matter if it was up to your expectations or not but it's just so good that it becomes a part of your expectations and you look for stories related to them furthur |