bro you all seriously need to calm down for those who are hating this story and saying that's not how this shit works, that's not how that was N! GA ITS A FANFICC IN A FANFIC A PERSON UNLEASHES HIS IMAGINATION THE POINT OF A FANFIC IS TO DIFFER FROM THE STORY HOW DUMBASS CAN YOU ALL BE!

Thanks

Goddamn I am loving this story eesh I cried a little while I was reading Chp 28 I fact binging 15-20 chps in a day awesome fic

I enjoyed the story. It is good for Naruto have get new family. Good work on the story.

I liked this for a while... however, you quoted Rambo (appreciated), though Naruto is a bit too much of an idiot. The dynamic between him and Kurama is just strange. I don’t care if you are Madara or Hashirama. You aren't talking to Kurama like that. Naruto is also just super cringe. I understand that he is supposed to have PTSD and probably depression but with this, he is like a switch. The daughter shit was sorta just shit. It's like you just inserted into the story just so it can be more of a hindrance to Naruto later. Despite the fact that Naruto already betrayed everyone and now his so-called daughter died. I believe this is my 5th time trying to read this story? I really want to enjoy this story, but it's so hard because the complex issues you try and tackle are tedious and, in my objective opinion not done very well at all. Great idea, though it's just not my cup of alcohol poisoning.

Stay amazing, my man.

NOT INO BASHING NARUTO LOVE ONLY INO AND DELETE DEVIL DISGUSTING WORD !

I am sorry for what you had to go through for us

Well was going to say he could get the eyes from Danzo in order to not go blind and get the eternal but doesn't seem like that will happen. only other choices really are Sasuke, Itachi, Kakashi and Obito.

So basically Itachi and Naruto had to do the same thing. the only difference is that Itachi really didn't have to kill the kids like he at least i don't think he did. Hopefully the Hokage at least wrote down something in a journal or not so that if he does die the next Hokage can know about it.

As soon as it said Naruto poked Konahamaru i was thinking that he might end up killing all the Sarutobi clan. also it was really stupid of him to show that to Sasuke at least i believe that since all he wants is power. hell i could see Sasuke trying to take his eyes if he found away to get the eternal. also with Sasuke not having the Sharigan yet he will probably be upset about it.

Wonder who's eyes Naruto will get for the eternal part or if Kurama will help with it so he doesn't go blind.

Naruto may be portrayed as being stupid but I think he's just never had the best teachers, the ones he had probably never taught him to the best of their ability and severely limited his knowledge. Plus you have to admit, Naruto could have some clever ideas, plus he honestly was amazing at evading pursuing ninja, like when he pulled pranks on the village and was chased by ninja, he never got caught by anyone except Iruka (and Iruka only managed this due to his knowledge of Naruto and a knack for being able to find him, like seriously he's the only one.). Plus let's not look over the fact that he's amazing at concealment, to the point he somehow wasn't seen/noticed by Neji(during the chunin exams), with his Byakugan activated.

really, stealing Arrows lines? LOL

GG

WHY AM I READING THIS IN SCHOOL (﹏)(﹏)