|Reviews for Black|
| Danni-Sherlockian-Ireland chapter 4 . 2/11
awhhh that is such a sweet chapter that made me cry...
can you add to this i would love to see if they still stayed friends in the future because that would make this story 100% better :)
| Grumpy DelSan13 chapter 4 . 1/24
Great job please update as soon you can
| natashar chapter 4 . 1/23
cant wait for more
| AmberB1993 chapter 4 . 1/23
keep writing more
| laugh0ften2012 chapter 4 . 1/23
Great chapter looking forward to some serious jake/bella fluf!
| teamjacob0729 chapter 2 . 1/23
I like this story so far. However, you should probably be more careful to cite the book when you directly use copyrighted text.
| All That's Left is a Girl chapter 3 . 1/22
Very nice work. That is exactly how it should have happened. You have a very nice writing style, very smooth and well paced. Keep it up!
| wolfhappiness chapter 3 . 1/22
Definitely different from Eclipse lol. Nice chapter. Update soon
| laugh0ften2012 chapter 3 . 1/22
Please update soon I can't wait to read Jakes reaction
| Dottyanne chapter 3 . 1/22
Fantastic. And that right there is exactly how it should have been!
| laugh0ften2012 chapter 2 . 1/17
Great start can't wait tobread more!
| snow eopard chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
I really enjoyed this you need to continue it please update soon
| Leppy99 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
I like it
Cant wait for ur next update
| maijacob chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
I like this story so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
| Pao chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Great start. Please continue!