Reviews for Black
Leppy99 chapter 4 . 2/21
you should continue this
Danni-Sherlockian-Ireland chapter 4 . 2/11/2014
awhhh that is such a sweet chapter that made me cry...
can you add to this i would love to see if they still stayed friends in the future because that would make this story 100% better :)
Grumpy DelSan13 chapter 4 . 1/24/2014
Great job please update as soon you can
natashar chapter 4 . 1/23/2014
cant wait for more
AmberB1993 chapter 4 . 1/23/2014
keep writing more
laugh0ften2012 chapter 4 . 1/23/2014
Great chapter looking forward to some serious jake/bella fluf!
teamjacob0729 chapter 2 . 1/23/2014
I like this story so far. However, you should probably be more careful to cite the book when you directly use copyrighted text.
All That's Left is a Girl chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Very nice work. That is exactly how it should have happened. You have a very nice writing style, very smooth and well paced. Keep it up!
wolfhappiness chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Definitely different from Eclipse lol. Nice chapter. Update soon
laugh0ften2012 chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Please update soon I can't wait to read Jakes reaction
Dottyanne chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Fantastic. And that right there is exactly how it should have been!
laugh0ften2012 chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
Great start can't wait tobread more!
snow eopard chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
I really enjoyed this you need to continue it please update soon
Leppy99 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
I like it
Cant wait for ur next update
maijacob chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
I like this story so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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