Your prose sparkles with life.

Yesss, this is great. Rob would go where his mother told him not to, naturally.

And I know Camford didn't like the baklava metaphor, but it made me giggle. Life would be better if all our bad days could be summed up with pastry metaphors.

I love the adorable mother/son moments in this. Their relationship is lovely. It would have been nice, I think, to see more of it in the series.

Anyway, I loved it! I hope you post more of these reworked standalones!