Reviews for To stay or go
Darkshadow008 chapter 59 . 4/23/2014
You're oh so welcome with the help, you help me just as much as I hope to help you! As much as I actually am a fan of the not so happy endings, this, THIS is a very good "Happy" ending. I like how for you not really sticking with the TV storyline how you have sprinkled little bits here and there. Beth is taken, I wonder who took her, if it'll be the same person, whoever it is in the TV series?!

I do hope you do a sequel! Because I strongly feel that this story has a long way from being OVER! :)
HermioneandMarcus chapter 59 . 4/23/2014
excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you
Darkshadow008 chapter 58 . 3/25/2014
I kid you not, I loved everything about this chapter! The fact that this wild and crazy redneck really does have a heart, especially after Merle. With some thing you stuck to the show, but mostly you did it all on your own! That's wonderful, because you didn't need to show to influence you, and you wanted it to be so different, for the most part. The fact that Andi gave Daryl her rings, I think the man will be buried with those things on his body, it wasn't cheesy or anything, you could tell that, especially, in this last little bit, they did truly love each other. To help her end her life, that has to be a real close tie with seeing his Brother as a walker. To send the group away to get supplies, I am pretty sure that rick did know she wasn't going to make it, but still went along with saying he could get medical supplies and had the others follow along...pure brilliant! Last minutes of Andi's life, who better to spend them with. No one!
Guest chapter 58 . 3/24/2014
I've just sat and cried my eyes out, probably more than what daryl did in the show with merle :( it's great writing, but I'm soo sad now :(
Em-Jaye chapter 58 . 3/24/2014
Ok I understand why it ended the way it did. That's the reality of the show but I NEED you to right the alternate ending where she survives and it all sunshine and friggin rainbows because I don't think my heart can take holding onto the story for so long it and ending that way
mrskaz453 chapter 58 . 3/24/2014
OMG... That was so sad...but awesome...

I dont' think I've read a fic that didn't end up having a happy ending... this ending is totally TWD...

Just Andi/Daryl in the end... and what she said to him in the end was sad, sweet, amazing...

Heartbreaking ending...not just for Daryl/Andi, but also for us, because this story is over...

Can't wait to read the next chapter and see how you close up the loose ends... and wouldn't mind reading the alternative ending, just because...

Thanks so much for taking the time to write this story... but no thanks for making me cry...LOL
I-am-Sherlocked-82 chapter 58 . 3/23/2014
Wow... I know this is "realistic" where Walking Dead is concerned but I was so sad reading this... I would love to read an alternate ending if only to satisfy my desire for Daryl to have a happy end. ;-) loved your story... thank you
Kwiff chapter 33 . 3/13/2014
Hi "guest" thank you for your review and opinion of my story, any review and constructive criticism is welcome... I would have messaged you privately but as you are a guest reviewer I am unable to do so.

I am sorry you feel this way about my story, unfortunately rape does happen... pregnancy from rape is also a reality and something that people have to deal with on a daily basis, around the world.

The point of it on my story is facilitate in my OC's downfall and breaking her emotionally so that she can build herself back up again, like you have to hit rock bottom before you can even begin to heal.

Either way, I am sorry you feel this way and hope that you find a story that is more to your liking and enjoyment.

Thanks,
Kwiff
Guest chapter 33 . 3/13/2014
Ok this story was just sick I don't get how you could write about this crap and I'm sorry to sound rude but I just can't stand it when people write about this it's just to much and then she's having a baby by a rapist makes it even worst
Darkshadow008 chapter 57 . 2/27/2014
I'm telling you this is picture perfect, literally! I kid you not this seemed like an actual episode, everyone was in character and you didn't forget anyone. I hope Carl got shot lol. I loved the last sentence with what Andi said, she was screaming like a banshee, she just tells Daryl that she thinks she's bleeding, I think that was brilliant! Update soon! :)
Darkshadow008 chapter 56 . 2/18/2014
So these are hunters? Tyrese? His body? This was a very dark chapter, and probably one of my absolute favorite ones! I could picture everything, I felt like I was in the courthouse, right beside Andi! Amazing writing!
Darkshadow008 chapter 55 . 2/16/2014
(Thanks for congrats!) My favorite thing about this has to be how you ended it, such a Rick saying, "We wait, we for our own." That reminds me of when Glenn said they bury their own, and don't burn them. I loved that part, just felt whoa I just heard Rick talking out loud. I like that yes, a lot of this chapter was Daryl, Andi and with them meeting up with Michonne, but you did go back to the others. Awesome! Waiting for another chapter! :)
Darkshadow008 chapter 54 . 2/11/2014
I gotta tell you, I must love the idea that Ty was on a fedex truck, making me think back with Dale was on the top of the RV all the time, I could just picture him doing that and. Pointing like traffic cop, I think that was a great idea.

I think it's about darn time! Daryl and Andi needed some real alone time, and they sure did get it. ;) I love this conversation after, the act, it's so them!

Aww if you say chapter 60, then there's only 6 more to go! I can't wait though!

Update soon!
Darkshadow008 chapter 53 . 2/3/2014
I love that the groups are starting to find one another! I mean some of the characters *cough* Beth get on my nerves, but overall they all seem to do better with one another. I liked the fact that Rick stepped up to try to tell Maggie and Beth that he was sorry about Hershel, I think back in about season 3 he wouldn't have done that, or it would have been weeks later.

Hey Andi I would enjoy every minute of being under that car with Daryl. Who cares if walkers are nearby lol. I like this chapter a lot, it shows just how much the group really does need one another! You did an amazing job capturing everyone's emotion(s) :)

Waiting for next chapter! I need to know what's going to happen next!
mrskaz453 chapter 53 . 2/3/2014
OMG... A herd on the highway, but at least Andi/Daryl are stuck together...

What is up with Beth and her dislike of Andi... I hope she isn't going to turn into another Carol... Her dislike of Andi is crap... Andi wasn't responsible for any problems at the prison...she was the victim... I would hope that someone smacks her in the head with the truth... I get her crush on Daryl, but Andi has helped to keep her alive...

Rick/Carl are now with them... Poor Glen, still missing...

Great chapter..

Update soon..
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