|Reviews for Unfathomable|
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/26/2014
love it cant want for it to be updated
| slippingunderneath chapter 4 . 5/24/2013
I love this! Please update soon! :}
| karlaserna chapter 4 . 5/10/2013
Omg yes! Those good news are like, REALLY GOOD! D; I mean! I would nearly have a heart attack if I discovered my friend has all the notes I need for a story! hehe of course I'll be waiting for the next chapter! This is one of the most interesting fanfics I've ever read! I had never read a fanfic about Jade being a mermaid hehe so I think this is just so unique! I loved your idea heehee! :'B Amazing amazing AMAZING! I'm just totally in love with this! I love how you get Jade and Beck in character! I just LOVE Bade so much! It makes me so happy that you're not giving up on this super amazing story! :'D THANKS FOR THAT! Yay! Karla's happy :B (I'm Karla xD haha) I love everything, seriously, I totally love your writing! Keep going, Amanda! :'D heheh YAY! You're an amazing writer! You're AWESOME! x'3 hehe
PS: I love your name, Amanda! :'D
PS2: You're awesome, 'cause even when you're in college you manage to write more about this story :'3 Seriously, it means a lot! Yay! Oh, and I'll be in college soon, too! :P Is it bad to be in college? :( I hope not so bad... I kinda LOVE to read fanfics written by amazing authors ;P heheh and... yeah xD :P
PS3: My god! Only 15 reviews so far?! D; [well... I think this is number 16, but... whatever... XD] This needs MORE reviews! Omg I'll try to review every chapter from now! Promise :B I'm a good reviewer! So don't worry haha x'3 I'll be sure to make you smile with each one of my reviews! :DDD Yay! heheh
Always be yourself and smile! :DD (like meee :DDDDDDD xD hehehe YAAAY!)
| spiderwriter chapter 4 . 5/9/2013
No worries. these things happen. cant wait to read more
| caro chapter 3 . 4/25/2013
I love this story please follow, I can not stand for next chapter
| LuvBadeForever chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
Love it! Uptade soon. )
| boughtthedream chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
Never knew I needed a mermaid Bade fic until you wrote this. I'm super interested to see where this story will go. Good job.
| Cottenpopcorn chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
Love ya story!Hope you update soon!
| asian fusion-tike chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
awww so cute!
| Lupa Eira chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
Wow! You've obviously put a lot of thought into this and made a real effort to keep the characterization accurate. EXTREMELY well done AU so far. I can't wait to read more!
| tsttoain chapter 3 . 4/18/2013
I was waiting for this update, so I'm very happy it's here :) I loved Beck's reaction ( I got to mow the lawn xD) and Jade and everything in general. I'm really exited for some more backstory and of course Beck and Jade interaction :)
| ZOEY chapter 2 . 4/12/2013
Amazing please update soon.
| CalmHyperbole chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Where did the people go then, since you said they left, after being forced to remain on land? I love the story by the way, just had that one little question. Also i kinda read the second chapter first by accident and it was great too! I cannot wait to see where you go with this.
| Peach chapter 2 . 4/11/2013
I like it a lot. Please update it soon? It completely reminds me of upside down and the little mermaid with a huge splash of originality. It's like all my favourite fantasy stories coming into one together with tones of your original ideas. It's really really great. Especially since it is your first try
| khay chapter 2 . 4/11/2013
I love the introduction. It kinda reminded me of the Avatar:TLA introduction and yet it's still wholly your own. It hooked me to the story so props for that.
I also love the first chap. The waking up Beck scene is perfect for introducing Beck and his mom and their background. And then came Jade, the mermaid!
I'm really looking forward to reading where this is going. Yay for originality :)
Great job and thanks for sharing.