Reviews for The Light In The Darkness
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timothy.nguyen.73 chapter 2 . 3/19/2015
I'm Se till confuse why you drag the fight with the Yoma. I mean Narufo beat Pein for god sake. He could have wipe that in an Instant.
Yolokai chapter 2 . 2/9/2015
Amigo continuala es muy buena tiene mucho futuro por favor no la dejes
acid.furry chapter 2 . 1/6/2014
I really like this story. I hope you update soon.
Residenthobo chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
DUDE

I LOVE THIS

THIS IS GENIUS

DUDE

SOMEBODY GET THIS GUY AN OSCAR okay maybe not an oscar but still though, I really enjoyed reading this and I hope to see more soon! :D
Alex2909 chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
interesting story. wonder how naruto will affect this world. cant wait for him to shock to claymores and awakened beings
Zomvee chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
Dude/chick this was awesome so please continue with the story.
When is the next chapter?
Lightningblade49 chapter 2 . 9/22/2013
excellent start to this story, a lot of thought was put into this I can tell, even minor changes like Naruto's Hair colour adds more to this with already the suggestion of him being a claymore even though we know it's not the case.
What you do with Raki I look forward to seeing with Naruto's Influence anything could happen maybe even an influence in Galk and Sid give them a chance to match up to the Claymores, I really do hope you get around to updating this id deserves to be continued.

PS:His Blade makes the Claymores look Pathetic lol perhaps it might influence some to put a design on there Claymores.
Lightningblade49 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Unique start you've caught my interest
tim223 chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
i like the story, it a great start, i hope you keep writing it. good luck
anon156 chapter 2 . 8/16/2013
Chapter 2, first contact with lone Yoma.

You didn't say anything about Naruto wielding a large blade, only a kunai. Dafuq?
Lack of appropriate punctuations and the lot of words jumbled in is at times, confusing.
Piterio chapter 2 . 8/13/2013
Interesting. While writing style leaved me a little confuse. The story itself was quite entertaining. I look forward to reading more of it.
Agato Wesker - The Black Fox chapter 2 . 8/8/2013
Well you drag crap on WAY too damn long and you made Naruto weak as hell. I don't think I need to explain what you did wrong but I will say that you need to remove your lips from Kishimoto's ass.
eternal nothingness chapter 2 . 8/2/2013
very interesting very interesting indeed

wonder how there going to take it when they realize naruto isn't a claymore..

hahahaha!
BombaDX chapter 2 . 7/16/2013
Keep it comin loving the, story so far, really hope K-rama is revived soon. Undead 8 tails Naruto or Yellow Chairs it dosen't matter to me. This story is awesome !
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