Reviews for The Message
daniel chapter 7 . 6/23
the herbert is dead?! nooooooooooooo!
Dylano146 chapter 7 . 5/6
That is indeed a diabolical cliffhanger. I was expecting Haibas truth about Tama to come out much later in the story. Needless to say, I'm surprised. Two more stories. I don't like this. It means I won't have any more of your stories to read :(

Dylano146 chapter 6 . 5/6
I dread to know what each and every event is ultimately leading up to. Though it is extremely thrilling.

Dylano146 chapter 5 . 5/6
Could this be the end of the interceptor? Somehow, being the interceptor, and being in the terrific trio's presence, I doubt that. But I'm always prepared to be surprised.

Dylano146 chapter 4 . 5/5
Want expecting the crying cub to be Ugaidi. Can't say I'm surprised though. He's our little mind future teller.

Dylano146 chapter 3 . 5/4
I like the whole idea of the interceptor turning into a good guy, even though in his head it's for his selfish reasons mainly. But they will need all the help they can get.

Dylano146 chapter 2 . 5/4
I love how the interceptor wasn't even scared of Virusi. Give a sence of an opposing force that could possibly stop him. I thought he was done when he got slashed though. Guess he can decide when and where his viruses come into play.

Dylano146 chapter 1 . 5/3
Virusi, a new villain. I'm guessing by the name he inflicts some kind of virus. One that makes the recipient burst into flames that is.

JNSx7 chapter 3 . 4/12
Guest chapter 2 . 1/22
i love (or should i say like?) the interceptor so much...and i dont know why...
erica.phoenix16 chapter 7 . 12/4/2014
Oh man!
Simbaanaya chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Hmm, hello. If anybody is here I wanted to tell you that this is a fantastic story! I love these so much! I recommend them to anybody who likes the lion king! I didn't come here to argue tpymk if that is what you are thinking, if you get this you should know that I never complained about you stealing my stories, your the liar, not me. My series is not a rip off of yours to me, mine is based off of something entirely different, it won't be the same. Talking about me behind my back won't get you anywhere, you've got problems. I don't mean this in a bad way, but your just mean. You can block me if you want to, but I don't like the way you are treating people. You can't hide behind this screen forever, people will see who you really are one day.
Lionlove and her cousin where right, you maybe a great writer, but your not a great influence, your a fake. You have emotional issues, you let other people tear you down. Your immature, you don't know how to handle things properly, I still have a lot to learn two though. All those bad things the rest of your goons are saying are crazy also, they are no better except for some of them, you should improve your attitudes, you won't get anywhere in life like this. Send your pointless back lash if you want, it wont change a thing. Have a good day, bye. By the way you all, have a blessed night! Bye!
ItDoesntMatterNow95 chapter 7 . 9/7/2013
Oh, no... No! Why? The hermit was one of your best characters! He didn't deserve such death. I'm so sad now...

Virusi accomplished what he wanted. I despise him! I want him dead! Dead! I don't care how, just... somebody kill him, please!

Haiba, why did you do it? Now Simba will kill you!

Oh, God... What a torturous cliffhanger!

Amazing story! I don't know what to expect in the next story... I'm afraid...
ItDoesntMatterNow95 chapter 6 . 9/7/2013
So the Hermit of Hekima didn't tell them to keep them safe? He's so noble...

They've managed to beat Virusi this time but he's far from defeated.

He'll be the first to go to the hermit and that's very bad.
ItDoesntMatterNow95 chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
For the first time in his life Simba was lost for words.

Yes, the Interceptor told him everything but he doesn't know that Virusi is alive. Well, he knows NOW...

I think the Simba will try to hurt the hermit...

But before he goes to him he has to kill Virusi. Somehow.
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