Reviews for Unbalanced Minds
Sara chapter 1 . 8/13/2015
Could you make more scenes with Tobirama x Madara in this story. Mabey.. Madara eventually starts having feelings for Tobirama and when Tobirama tries to force himself on Madara again he notices the Uchiha is submissive to him? He maybe has plans on stealing him from his brother Hashirama, but also confused about his own developing feelings for Madara? Leaving Madara torn between the two...
-Sara
Guest chapter 4 . 8/12/2015
Wow that scene between hashirama x madara at the end is FANTASTIC! it was beautiful, sexy, exiting... please make more to this same story.. keep it going please. :) the storyline is great! I REALLY liked the drama with Tobirama as well. Well though out! Thank you for this story!
-Sara
Gelian Agretti chapter 4 . 7/14/2015
Interesting story, I hope the continuation
I wonder how many chapters will be?
Boneheart chapter 4 . 5/25/2015
Please update! I LOVE uke Madara! :)
SlyBlue08 chapter 4 . 2/5/2015
Excellent plot and writing. I really enjoyed reading this, once I started, I couldn't stop. Some parts really get to you. I felt bad for both Madara and Hashirama. Although I'm against Madara being an uke, but you still did a good job!
UchihaX chapter 4 . 12/23/2014
That was really awesome I felt so sad for madara I almost cried. You're an excellent writer. Well done
Moonlily13 chapter 4 . 11/11/2014
That was so sad, why cant madara have wat he wants without feeling despair and pain. I want madara 2 find happiness with hashirama or hikaku
Dynamo chapter 4 . 2/17/2014
What? WHAT? WHAT?! How dareth you leave-eth me onto this? I haven't cried...

YET ANYWAY!

I feel my heart throb when I read this even after reading it a second time T-T.. Them feels.. Please update when you have the time T-T..
HashiMadaTobiIzuxxx chapter 4 . 12/13/2013
I cried a lot for reading this chapter.I felt my heart r broken. Poor Maddie, poor him so much. .

That was a cruel fate for Uchiha clan, even was Maddie. Huhu :((. Hashirama who crushed Madara so much, love him. Dont make Hashi broke up Maddie, please. Poor them.

I think it poor for Hikaku himself cause of his one-sided loving. .! . Threesomes HashiMadaHika (they both love Maddie chan ;))).

Lovely author, please do not stop writing, ok. Your loyal fan now waiting it much. I crazy for this fic.

see ya and wait for update new chapter anytime soon.
HashiMadaTobiIzuxxx chapter 2 . 12/10/2013
Oh, No. Tobi was Mr Ice blender, hahaha. why did he always break a happy time between Hashi and Maddie chan?. :)). Ok, I can say it if Tobi had fallen in love Maddie although he didn't except his feeling for Madara. It will be dramatically when Senju brothers had fallen in love with leader Uchiha. Haha.

I love it, I like it. :)), evil Tobirama. Author, I really really you keep writing it. :(.

Ok move on the chapter 3.
HashiMadaTobiIzuxxx chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
So hurt and Dam Tobirama, he was raping Maddie. He did it cause he hate Maddie or love? I think it hated more than loved.

It's cursed clan, sure. Poor Maddie, and Hikaku was a great friend after Hashirama who want to bring a happiness for my Maddie chan. 3 .

I've read this story for briefly, and now I am going to read again each chapters to leave a feedback for you, my author. 3
mortimermortman chapter 4 . 9/25/2013
I love that you added drama with Hikaku in this. This is a great story and i hope that you continue it soon! I must know what happens :)
Yamiga chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I like it! Tobirama is such a prick though, he's a little OCC but that's a good thing for this story. I feel terrible for Madara and Hashirama is just...clueless! Anyway, THIS story is a keeper for sure. And BTW, I suggest you block "narutosuck", if you haven't already. They're like an annoying tick.
FromBefore chapter 4 . 7/16/2013
I like the concept of Akuma though he doesnt show up that much, is he meant to be Madara's dark conscious or something else or what the jinchuuriki have
Good story!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2013
Akuma is a real mean person but Hashirama is so nice to Madara, when no one is
I love this story
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