Reviews for The Rhythm Of The Heart II: The Search For The Seven Stones
mariekiki50 chapter 36 . 5/20/2016
I love your fan fiction !
Djuul chapter 25 . 4/3/2016
Excuse me?! How could phantom R, the hero, lose? Not fair!
MiraRobin123 chapter 36 . 1/23/2016
Why cliffhangers...? Either way, this is great so far. I just want to keep reading.
MiraRobin123 chapter 3 . 1/13/2016
I feel like Hetalia is in this. *face desk* Why does the Hetalia fandom keep coming back!? Either way, great job!
Roy908 chapter 36 . 7/10/2015
The story is too good! Update!
PhantomCommentor chapter 36 . 5/30/2015
Here are more suggestions! :)

8. Phantom R and Marie gets trapped in a (insert trap here :))
9. the Author (You, Angelucie) gets trapped inside this fanfiction's world for good (relates to #1 :D)
10. The Gang faces its Dark Side (like their Dark opposites :D)
10A. They fight against them (related to #5)
11. Phantom R's weapon breaks (related to #5)
11A. Phantom R gets new one after meeting a Weapon Master/Forger (I think? :D)

Well that's it for right now. So see ya! :)

P.S., Life is always unexpecting, right? Take as much time as you can ! :)

See ya! :) :D

-PhantomCommentor
PhantomCommentor chapter 36 . 5/30/2015
WOW!:) You finally updated! Well, your writing is amazing, Angelucie! :)

Well, let's get down to business. (I guess :D)

Here are some suggestions:

1. Introduce some new OCs
2. A tragedy strikes
3. The gang gets transported to the 1981
4. The gang goes to the US (Did they ever go there?)
5. All-Out War(?)
6. The gang goes to court as Defendant/Witness
6A. They also meet Phoenix Wright (if you want to) (Phoenix Wright is a defense attorney)
7. The Gang goes to an NBA Finals game (by the way, the Finals start June 4) (relates to #4)

That is all! :)
By the way, you made a mistake in the end of Ch. 36

"END CHAPTER 36
Next time on ROTH 4!"

You should have put,
"END CHAPTER 36
Next time on ROTH II(2)"

Well anyway, I hope you enjoy life! :)

P.S, Take as much time as possible! :)

See ya!

-PhantomCommentor
Abinac chapter 36 . 5/28/2015
ROTH 4? I think we skipped a ROTH
SakuraDreamerz chapter 36 . 5/27/2015
Oh crap! Something's going down! D:
Guest chapter 36 . 5/4/2015
I absolutely love your fanfic. But agh its been a year! I feel like im watching sherlock
DestinyLatias chapter 36 . 4/3/2015
THE TENSION IS KILLING ME OHMYGOD. TEACH ME YOUR WAYS PLEASE.

but seriously:
Amazing, you really should continue! I admire your skill!
KaguTheGreat chapter 36 . 2/17/2015
Is it bad that I almost freaked out when I saw you updated? Because I did... Anyways, I fully support this. Life is rough, and more important admittedly that fanfiction, so take as long as you need! -
KaguTheGreat chapter 35 . 11/13/2014
Wow. Well... Emily's okay... I think... But no one else is... Except Marie, surprisingly. I don't think she got hurt. Napoleon's crew is getting stronger though...
Abinac chapter 35 . 11/12/2014
You spelled rogue wrong unless you actually meant to say red.
SakuraDreamerz chapter 35 . 11/12/2014
Aaahh! What's going to happen to him!?
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