Reviews for The lives of immortals |
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![]() ![]() Aw poor Jack! I wonder what will happen now? Will pitch try and use jacks fear? Will Jack distance himself in fear of hurting the others? What shall happen? |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHOOOOHOOOOOO! NEW CHAPTER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter has no name? |
![]() ![]() ![]() All I could think was Toy Story. Buzz and Woody vs. Pitch Black. So cool. 5/5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oneword... AWESOME! 5/5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Step two and three, in progress. So touching, I teared up when I found out what happened to his things. I'm a history buff, the house I was born in and still live was built in 1850. I trace my family here in the USA to the Mayflower and half the Pilgrims from that journey and further back to England. Jack's or not, those were precious, time effort and love on his part just added to it. Mission complete. 0017 out. 5/5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why am I laughinng? That end should be sad but Bunny made e LAUGH! Not fair. 5/5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did, it was awesome, I'm laughing so hard I started coughing (I hate having bronchitis). Night. 5/5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() 66 chapters, you may have been told but no, Pippa was Jamie's friend who has the bennie although the voice actress also did Jack's sister, hence, in the credits, the two are listed for the same person but Jack's sister was never named in the movie. It was read as one person so many misinterpreted it. |
![]() ![]() Both Jack's little sister and Jamie's friend were played by the same actress, so everyone's confused about whose who. I don't think they gave Jack's sister a name at all, actually. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are a few stories here on fanfiction that I keep rereading. This is one of them. It's a simple joy to keep rereading it, and I wanted to thank you for providing it. In this chapter I especially like the repetition, and how great of a brother you've made of Jack. I'd like to give a more meaningful review, but I'm not that gifted with words. Thank you again, Rutger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Owh you are a master. I had forgotten how incredibly skilled you are. Are you familiar with Hemingway's shortest story: "Baby clothes for sale, never used." You've done something similar at the end here. That last sentences tells a whole story within itself. |
![]() ![]() Hahah! Oh my Gosh, Umbrige the Toad as Cupid! |
![]() ![]() Now you've planted a plot bunny; an evil plot bunny that has taken residence inside my head. Is it sad that now I'm thinking of JaxkXPierre? |
![]() ![]() Well, that answers one of my questions. now I have one more. What was Gaia going to say about Pierre? |