|Reviews for Slow Fading|
| sparklymeg chapter 1 . 2/3
This was absolutely heartbreaking.
| pudget12 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Please please update us as to what happens after Bella says "Hello" in Dusty.
I read some of this one at work while on my lunch, I bawled like a baby! My co workers are convinced I am crazy.
| moreno.cheryl37 chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I don't know if you still check the reviews or not, but encase you do I just had to let you know that I just read Dusty and this outake and words can not express the impact these two stories had on me! First of all the sheer devastation and waste that drugs create, insidiously corrupting humanity and leaving horror in it's wake. But, also, today's society is creating a disposable youth, with the breakdown of family values, basic respect for others and being afraid to really parent our children. These stories were very disturbingly real, you must have experienced this first hand or you did some killer research! The chaotic writing style really put me right in the middle, I almost felt as though I were there. I cried my eyes out and ranted and raved at the supposed adults. My heart broke for Edward, Alice and the sluts and all the other disenfranchised. I couldn't put it down. If you ever publish this, please let me know. Thank you, you are brilliant!
| Danielle85 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
I can't help but hate myself after reading this. I knew it would be full of heartache. I use to feel something for Bliss and Dusty. But there's just so much pain and longing that words can't even describe how desperate I am for both of them to find some peace. I hate the way Dusty ended-I always hoped there was some sort of point to all that he and Bliss went through. Some sort of last-ditch life preserver for them to grasp, but reading this just brings it all back. I always enjoy Dusty's POV. This is beautifully written, if not completely heartbreaking. I hope you ladies write a sequel. Bliss and Dusty have squandered love like no one before them, but everyone needs hope!
| elizabeth bennette chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
still confuse with this story and Dusty. Did Edward left Bella at the end because he thinks he is not good for her? He was not able to kick his drug habit. Sad.
| Rita01tx chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
If I could reach through my computer and grab onto Dusty, I'd never let go! How in the hell his parents never saw what was happenin' to him, I'll never understand! He was a fuckin' KID, for God's sake! It's their job to take care of him and his sister!
You made them so real, it breaks my heart to think this happens to anyone!
| sarah chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
WOW! Not much more I can say than WOW, I loved it, I've never been so moved or emotional when i've read a book, it broke my heart but was well worth it.
Why you have not had your work published, I dont know, your writing is amazing, beautiful, perfect and flawless. After reading this and Dusty, I would definately recommend your work to anyone.
| Becky.Moreno chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Break my heart ...
| bebeygurl15 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Please write a sequel, Im literally in tears. This cant be over.
| EdwardsBrunette2 chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
| sweethotlove chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Edward is so gross I can't believe I didn't see it before. This paints a whole new life on Dusty to me. I know there's no proper ending but in my mind I really hope Bella got away for good and that was her dad on the phone. Edward's such an overprivileged idiot and there's no excuse for any of the gross behavior. He's a grown man. At some point you have to grow up, cry a river and move on. Ick he's just so gross.
| meryannmt chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Just beautiful.. Dusty truly is an amazing work of art. Is there going tone any more outtakes? About the future maybe ? After the 'hello'?
I'd love to keep reading about this characters.. I seem to never get enough.
Thanks for sharing.
| OhGeeFantasy chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
i feel sick...I hate that they are not together. they love one another...they should be together. :(
| jurodgers chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
wow, just wow... i have no words
| FrenchSoRandom chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
it took me a while to read trough it but it was sooooo worth it !
i really love love love it i also had trouble getting back in the mind set but the words spoke for themselves !
so devastingly beautiful a perfect counter point of view from her's ... brilliant