Reviews for The Goblet of Fire's Trap
redeyehawk23 chapter 3 . 1/5/2023
I'm so beyond lost reading this...
EdTheBeast chapter 17 . 3/27/2022
It is a very cute kids must read story. Except for killing bad guys it is K.
Ravenjuubi chapter 16 . 8/13/2021
Nice chapter
Ravenjuubi chapter 17 . 8/5/2021
Great chapter
Jostanos chapter 17 . 7/8/2021
Apology accepted. The situation has been pretty much resolved, and now?

"BACK TO MAHORA"! *eye smiles*
nightwing27 chapter 7 . 6/7/2021
good thing in my story that old fool plots for year 1 to 4 will be known and tourtment will never happen no fudhe or crouch to bribe and control and no lucius
Pushi19 chapter 17 . 6/7/2021
Update it soon please
god of all chapter 17 . 12/25/2020
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Jameslw chapter 17 . 12/25/2020
great story please continue
Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 12/23/2020
I just thought of something. When Hermione asked Harry WHY he was eating right that moment when DINNER had already been eaten, why did she say it like HARRY was there for that dinner she’s talking about? She sounds like she thinks Harry was right there during the feast when ‘dinner’ happened, and SHOULDN’T still be hungry after eating a meal he wasn’t even around for. *lol*

Though now I feel sorry for Harry. He just FINISHED his 12 hour night time sleep back in Japan and was in the middle of BREAKFAST. Now he’s been dragged ‘back home’ to a country where it’s now night time AGAIN, and expected to do what exactly? Go BACK to sleep for ANOTHER 12 hours just because everybody else was going to? He’s already had his 12 hours of sleep and is wide awake now and ready to start the DAY, not go back to sleep just because it’s suddenly night time again.

Since he was in the middle of breakfast when he was dragged here, what about Lunch and Dinner if he has to go back to sleep now? He’ll be starving by tomorrow, if he misses lunch and dinner because he was forced to go back to sleep again with the ONLY meal in his belly being breakfast.
WhiteElfElder chapter 17 . 12/23/2020
It is strange how you kept flopping between Rose and Harry, she and he, which sometimes made me need to backtrack to follow whom was being talked about. Otherwise, I enjoyed the story.
lilly-flower15 chapter 17 . 12/23/2020
great chapter update soon
Haseo187 chapter 16 . 11/14/2020
I love this story so keep up the good work!
Jostanos chapter 16 . 10/31/2020
Kreacher is gone as well as the majority of Tom ("DON'T CALL ME THAT!") Riddle's horcruxes. Now there is only one left, and that is in Gringotts.

OH man.. This is too good!
lunadream13 chapter 16 . 9/26/2020
good story hope to read more of it.
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