Reviews for Harry Potter and the Heir of Slytherin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Once again extremely good now on to book three |
![]() ![]() ![]() half the chapters just sawdust, filler, quantity not quality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt for now, but you'll need to pull off quite the denouement to make Hermione's death worth it. If you're going to change the tone that drastically, the plot will need to match it. Certainly not more muggle cement pranks, and TBH I think probably Draco will have to die because he's going to step over the line - especially with them knowing to whom Dobby belongs. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, such a sad and powerful ending. Where is Harry? So dramatically different from the books. I'm blown away by how AWESOME your writing is. I'm so glad I bookmarked your story last year to enjoying it this year. Can't wait to read what happens next in book 3. Onward I go. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nnnnnnnnnnoooooooooo! YOU KILLED HER! FOR ONCE SHE WASNT EVIL, SHE WAS A GREAT ADDITION TO THIS STORY AND YOU KILLED HER! IM SOBBING RIGHT NOW. ONWARD I READ. TAKE CARE AND BE WELL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm the first reviewer of 2024. Wahoo! So far the story is getting good. The teachings of Flamel is kinda fascinating buy I do find it boring. Now the introduction of Selene now that I'm interested in and the fact the way he's being a good gentleman to her when he's only 12. Can't wait to see what happens next and you aren't even in Hogwarts yet. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() Vampires! Cutting his wrist to let her drink his blood? You just went off the deep end. You runed a very good story by going nuts, I'm done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Or muggles were originally magical bht theyre all squibs? |
![]() ![]() ![]() he deserved it screw helping him after let him rot in pain |
![]() ![]() ![]() Puberty hit harry like a train! Jee dude, you could atleady warn us |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry has pretty much admitted to himself that he has a crush on daphne. So my questions is why is he making advances on the other female friends? Is it puberty talking? Or perhaps he doesnt even relize what hes doing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for another great (re) read. Nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. This is a quite different take on the HP story and I find it quite refreshing and interesting. I really like the internal dialogs you're written for the various characters to add depth to their development. I look forward to any additional stories you may choose to post. |