|Reviews for Cookie Madness|
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
Congrats! I award you with the funniest fanfic I've seen in FOREVER award!
| AA - MamaBirdCat chapter 2 . 4/14/2013
Glad ya didn't let Beach Head get ignored or he might have come around and made you do pushups until your arms fell off..
Seriously cute - ya should have let someone give poor Lowlight a cookie...
| Dina Sana chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Cool hope you update more
| Kusari-Gama 61602 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
*squeal* YOU POSTED! *glompattack* I love how you took some of my suggestions. -
However, there is this one little itsy-bitsy nitpick near the end. You wrote, "...said Clutch. 'I'll raise you $10.'" then a few lines later, you wrote "'Hmmm, Spirit. Three thousand and twenty-six dollars.' responded Ace." Consistency is the key. If you're going to write out a number, then continue writing out numbers. (unless you're talking about a report. ex: "Report #324.")
Good job! :DD
| ranger-zenchi chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
I really enjoyed that. I especially loved Snake Eyes pouting at the beginning and then him and Roadblock protecting the kitchen door. Everyone's reaction to Hawk's appearance/yelling was great as well. Thanks for sharing.
| AA - MamaBirdCat chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Yikes! A cookie war in the pit...