|Reviews for Clever Green|
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/13
Well, I agree. However, I would very much like it if you update :!
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| UnorthodoxDreamer chapter 3 . 4/3
May I ask where you got the cover photo from and what it's of? I have my suspicions and all, but I would like to know for sure. I do enjoy your story by the way. It's delightful.
| purple sky always chapter 3 . 3/23
Great chapter. I love that Harry is such an intelligent baby. I wonder when they will encounter the magical world.
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 3/22
Your characterization of Lily Potter is extremely flawed.
| Cersesi chapter 3 . 3/19
I like it.
| lambtastic chapter 3 . 3/12
I love it! Harry is so cute but is he advancing too fast? I feel like he is at least physically. I understand that mentally he is advanced but his body shoulded be allowing him to talk so well. No wonder Petunia was freaked out by him. Lol. Anyway, please continue soon!
| Doctor Frostybuscus chapter 3 . 3/12
Please update soon! I love stories like this. :3 And do you think that you could maybe write a Lily/Sherlock story? Where Lily leaves James? I am unashamed to say that you made me interested in the ship and I want a story about it. :)
| angelaneahwalker chapter 3 . 3/5
it's so good...please don't stop now!
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/2
One little thing is a very powerful thing - mum vs mom. Harry is British. Sherlock is British. The sounds of mum and mom are so recognisably different that using the incorrect one is extremely jarring. It's a little thing, but please consider it in the future.
Also I think that Harry's speech pattern is too advanced both for his age (even as a clever baby) and based on how Lily herself described his development.
| Von chapter 1 . 3/2
Theres something so very charming about the dedication behind the decision to shape up and get clean. :)
| Pinksakura200 chapter 3 . 2/23
Wonderful. Little Harry and Sherlock are so cute! When will John arrive? Can't wait to read more!
| XxPandaBearxX chapter 3 . 2/23
Oh my this has the making of a brilliant story. Can't help but wonder when you will update.
| AmethystSiri chapter 3 . 2/22
Would love to read more...
Please update again soon :)))