i suppose it works as a prequel. now... off to read what happens next

i really like this fic. i like your approach and style. the ending was perfect. i like it better than "Angel of Mine".

loved it

That was really good and well written, but all your stuff is, so I'm not surprised. One thing I didn't like was the "The End". We know it's the end. It kinda' ruins the whole "dramatic revelation understanding" thingie of the poem. But that's all I don't like, because this story is great.

Hey whats up! This is a very nice... story/poem/sonet whatever! Seriously, this was a very interesting look into their relationship. This could quite possibly be how it really went down, or the start of it.

Very good work, I'm truly impressed, and i'm not flapping your feathers, this is art. I'm honored that you reviewed my story, The Thing. I thought the sporty thing to do would be to return the same gesture, and I'm glad i did. I needed an honest-to-good insight, fantastic story.

I love the desciption, I like when she first walked out of C.C building to check up on Vegeta. It had a nice cool feels about it. Then my favorite part was near the end the interaction was good, but the awesome part was the fact that they were so incharacter but in a poetic fasion which was very intriguing by the way, again nice job!...

Oh, yeah, you're right... I do get strange reviews... Huh,well fancy that hehe C-Ya! your indepted fan V.J, thanks a lot for the support!

I'm being stupid. Well you need to write more. Please this is a good ficcy.

kiawtha

ahhhh yet another really good fic i truly don't know what is going through my mined at the momentbut i really do engoy reading you fics please continue (in other words do another one!)

i liked it but it could use a better ending

hey there. another great ficcy. hope to check out more of urs.

ja ne

~starr~

I liked the poem and Vegeta didn't seem ooc! He seemed very normal to me! Well g2g! Keep on a writnen

Hmm...I like it!

It was pretty good, I liked the poem the best :)

The poem is the best 's touching!

awww i think i already reviewed oh well awww its cool:) i love all of your stories

good job. Vegeta isn't ooc at all. i love your story Because of His Onyx Eyes. you are a great author. keep up the good work!