Reviews for Birdsong |
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![]() ![]() ![]() why do I keep getting update notification when there is no extra chapters and the story is complete? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo! This is beautiful. Its nice how you made Uchiha Madara more relatable and human. The way you told the story with the underlying tone of sadness and loss mixed in with the love story made it a masterpiece. Thank you for this! Ever thought of writing one with the Uchiha brothers (Sasuke and Itachi) in it? :3 Stay safe! |
![]() ![]() Beautiful ending! It left me wanting more but there was enough resolution to Madara and the overall plot that it doesn't feel too abruptly ended and provides enough hints as to what happened later on. Indeed, their relationship was vastly misunderstood by everyone back then but there was some that had eyes and saw it for what it was. Love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That ending was better... way better than the actual one! I love you and thank you for that! |
![]() ![]() Wow, did not expect to see more but happy to have more to read of the good ending! I like the nuance you give the characters and how different things might have been if Hashirama was a girl. It honestly looks like a better future, for Madara definitely, and perhaps this good fortune will extend to the Uchiha clan in the future because of the changes. It's certainly not without it's challenges and I like the emotional struggles you give them while not taking away the core of their characters. I especially enjoyed reading Tobirama and Madara team up against Hashi only for it to end up failing spectacularly. :D |
![]() ![]() Interesting.. I liked the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for updating I absolutely adore Madara and Hashi can’t get enough of them️️ |
![]() ![]() wow your fanfic is by far my most favourite naruto fanfic ever this was so amazing each and every single scene i read this fanfic after reading your fan comic but this was just wow a thousand possible scenarios were swirling in my mind when madara and hashi would meet again in edo tensei form and i can also vividly imagine her mother to be kind and gentle to her and being supportive i can even think of how hashi would be at some point like "if i was a male then tobirama perhaps you could have gotten father figure and then him replying (i am not sure if they were kids or is this some sort of chat after some emotional event like hashi becoming shoudaime ) tobirama hugs hashi and says 'you are right i am sure i would have enjoyed the company of an elder brother but then i wouldnt have the chance to meet my second mother now ,would i ?' (i know this scene is a bit oc for tobirama but i cant stop thinking about it when i was about to write my chemistry quarterly exam today) sorry for the rant just wanted to say that i love this type of stories and you executed both the comic and fanfic so well .oh and i really wanted to ask the ending in which looks into the village and voices rise and hashi watches them satisfied is hashi reminiscing about her past ? again sorry for this long rant i want to say a lot more but i have already ranted enough to make anyone feel bored so i just hope you keep writing your breathtaking stories and a story suggestion from me i recently read the fanfic the red flash the concept was amazing with naruto elder sister loving uchiha itachi if you are thinking of a tragic yet beautiful story then try this i have a hundred scenarios to take this tory as well anyways that is you are interested once again thank you for this fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great and also a little sad, if you thin about. All this could have been avoided if Madara just confessed his feelings for Hashi. That he didn't just want to marry her for political gain, but because he actually loves her. But we know how prideful he is. And oh, Hashi, you are so dense. Can you not see Madara's feelings for you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, this was beautiful. Just, oh so many feelings. I really feel sorry for Madara and felt his hurt and pain, I just wanted to hug him. I must give you kudos for the way everything was crafted. So so good~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story but I do feel so sorry for Madara... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one is much sadder- pity, it's nigh canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this story and adored it. I was amazed by the quality of your writing, and was overjoyed to find a genderbent ship on HashiMada, as reading the yaoi shipping fics bothers me. Birdsong was so beautifully sad, with Madara stuck with a clueless Hashi, and a protective Tobirama. I loved how you characterized them and changed their dynamics perfectly to fit Hashi's change in gender. Also, Madara's unrequited love with Hashi was so emotional and tragic that I sympathized completely. Another thing that impressed me was how canon the story was. It was a wonderful read, even though the ending was so sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such a beautiful story... |