Reviews for Infinite Visibility |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As someone who lost a loved one on that day,this is very painful. You turned it around real nicely. I loved it. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this has definitely been one of the most incredible and well written stories I’ve ever read. The story on its own is beautiful and heart wrenching but the way you write it makes it so much more. Thank you so much for sharing this. I feel like I’ve been on a roller coaster of emotions reading and I have to go watch Remember Me after this. I watched it years ago but it’s been so long that I didn’t even remember it was about 9/11. I’m glad I forgot because I read the first half of this not knowing Tyler’s fate and I think it made reading this all the more emotional. I absolutely have to check out your other stories after this! Thanks for sharing:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tears are streaming down my face, your writing makes me feel SO much it’s crazy |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way Edward came back into Bella’s life is interesting, a little odd I think imagining how deeply Edward loved Bella.. and now he’s in love with her daughter. I’m sad Bella’s giving up. The line you wrote about Bella wanting to go where Tyler is even if that’s nowhere, completely shattered my heart |
![]() ![]() ![]() I waited all day during work to continue reading this heartbreaking story, and it just keeps getting more heartbreaking. I wonder how Edward fits back into this story or if he doesn’t at all |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my, my heart hurts |
![]() ![]() ![]() No no, I’m holding back tears before I go into work. I wondered to myself how Edward could possibly make his way back into this story or if he ever would. I had come to the conclusion it would have to be death but I hoped I was wrong. The fact you hinted about the twin towers should have been mote obvious to you. I’m so devastated about Tyler |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a beautiful story, I’ve never read any new Moon AU where I don’t want Edward to come back. I’m falling in love with Tyler too |
![]() ![]() ![]() You do such an amazing job at capturing this love |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a beautifully written story. It’s so poetic. Your imagery is so vibrant. I’ve watched Remember Me but it’s been years and I really don’t remember it anymore. I thought I’d be rooting for Edward but Tyler is so likeable. I’m excited to contiune |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was a very deep and moving story and I’m not going to lie it made me cry even when I know it’s going to be sad… beautiful written. |
![]() ![]() Shouldn't Bella be turning 20? She had her 18th at the start of her senior year. She would have had her 19th at the start of her 1st year of college. SO... Her 20th would be at the beginning of her 2nd year of college if her birthday is still September 13th as in the books. Just a thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story conceptually. There is a big continuity problem though. Edward was there when Tyler died. In his apartment in the days following his death. Vampire memory combined with mind reading, (around Aiden and Kelsey) He would remember that name and know that Bella was pregnant when he left her in New York. He would have remembered the name and everything when Skyler told him her name. I find it difficult to believe he admitted to vampirism and she never discussed the fact that her father died before she was born. In New York. in 2001... she was born in February of the following year. Just sayin. Just the most basic questions about her family would have revealed that her late grandfather lived in a tiny town in Washington state where he had been the police chief. Or that she had a grandmother named Renee... that her mother's best friend was named Jake Black... He surely would have shown SOME interest in her life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am not sure if you are still reading these reviews, but I had to reach out to you about this story. Lately, i have had you author page left open on my devices, slowly making it through your stories. I’ve read Departures, twice. Objects In Mirror, twice. I love those stories. (I know, I am one of those readers who rarely reviews, I am terrible at it, sorry!) I have been putting off Infinite Visibility because I don’t usually read vampire fics, I also don’t usually read crossovers. And given that it was about 9/11, quite honestly, I wasn’t sure I could handle it. I don’t know that I even have words to describe how amazing this story it. I read angst, I don’t mind it, I quite like it. But never has there been a story that had me so engaged, so in love with the characters. I literally wept through Chapter 12. You wrote beautiful characters, far richer than Bella originally was written. Definitely, a deeper, more wonderful Tyler. This will forever be a true favorite. I will read it again and again. Thank you so much for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! It makes me feel so much, both happy and sad. |