|Reviews for Bride of Discord|
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 17 . 4/11/2017
You mean, "Shrek 2"? 'Cause that was from the second film, not the first. Also, yay! They finally confessed their feelings to one another! I'm so happy!
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 16 . 4/11/2017
*chuckles* Nice. Also, all right! It's settled, then! Come on, girls! Let's go find Discord; so that Fluttershy can confess her feelings to him, and be with him for evermore. Speaking of which, you don't mind if I do this, do you? Good. Okay. Here we go.
Discord: I was the one who had it all...
I was the master of my fate...
I never needed any pony in my life.
I learned the truth, too late...
I'll never shake away the pain...
I close my eyes, but she's still there...
I let her steal into my melancholy heart.
It's more than I can bear!
Now, I know she'll never leave me;
Even as she runs away!
She will still torment me,
Calm me, hurt me, move me, come what may...
Wasting in my lonely tower,
Waiting by an open door.
I'll fool myself, she'll walk right in...
And be with me, for evermore...
I rage against the trials of love!
I curse the fading of the light!
Though she's flown so far beyond my reach,
She's never out of sight!
Now I know she'll never leave me,
Even as she fades from view!
She will still inspire me, be a part
Of everything I do...
Wasting in my lonely tower,
Waiting by an open door...
I'll fool myself, she'll walk right in...
And as the long, long nights begin...
I'll think of all that might have been...
Waiting here... for... ever...more~!
**Music Intensifies, Ends**
Again, I couldn't resist. It's just, I felt that I had to do it. But seriously, you can't not listen to this song and think it fits well with this point in the story! Right?
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 15 . 4/11/2017
Aww...that's so sad. Also, seeing the scenario that we're in; I just felt like I had to do this...
Discord: Chaos is all I know... It's hard to let it go...I wasn't meant to feel, or know, of kindness...
The promises I've made, were broken with no shame. My evil deeds were done, in utter blindness... Heartless... No compassion...
Every action, done with no second thought.
Only living, for revenge, all for naught. [Spoken: But...]
Her beauty had moved me... Her goodness improved me...
Her beautiful soul, that's why I... loved her...
Her passion, her sweetness... I found my completeness...
Oh, how I did love her; she could have loved me too...
If can't have her, then who?
Long ago, I should have seen... all the things I could have been...
Careless, and unthinking, I took over!
No pain could be deeper! No life could be cheaper...
No point anymore, if she can't love me...
No way would she ever... share my life with pleasure...
I know she cannot have a happy life with me...
I could plainly see...
From how she looked at me...
Let this be the end... of... me~!
**Music Swells, Ends**
I remember seeing that you posted a parody of "If I Can't Love Her" with these lyrics on YouTube. I saw that you were originally going to use this song; but, unfortunately, it didn't make the final cut. So, I decided to use them as part of my review for this chapter. I hope you like it.
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 14 . 4/11/2017
Uh-oh. Discord heard everything she said, didn't he?
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 13 . 4/11/2017
YES! FLUTTERCORD MOMENT! FINALLY! *sighs happily in relief*
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 12 . 4/11/2017
Don't worry, I'm not mad. I like these references you're putting in here. Aww. Poor Fluttershy. Poor Discord. :(
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 11 . 4/11/2017
Y'know, I actually enjoyed the direction you were going in for this chapter. It was really good. Anyways, I have two things to say about this chapter. First of all, the part where they were feeding the animals reminded of the "Something There" sequence from the animated Disney movie, "Beauty & The Beast". I LOVED that movie, and I still do. But, now that there's a live-action version of it; it's hard to say which version I like better. While I do have a soft spot for the original, classic, animated version; I gotta say, I like this new one better, 'cause, in this movie, there were things that made a whole lot of sense that didn't in the original. Second, if I didn't know better, based on the looks of it, I'd say they were almost about to kiss. If that's the case, then...(plays clip: "OH, COME ON!") *chuckling* I'm sorry. I just couldn't resist. I mean, really, if you get what I'm saying, can you blame me? XD It's just...I really wanted to see them kiss! :(
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 10 . 4/11/2017
Ooh. I like where this is going.
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 9 . 4/11/2017
Y'know, I can't help but think of that one song, "Something There", from "Beauty & The Beast"; the 2017 Live-Action Version/Remake. Okay, that's it. I'm putting this song in the comments. Fluttershy will be singing the parts of Belle, Discord will be singing the parts of the Beast. (Disclaimer: I don't own the song, or the characters. "Something There" belongs to "Beauty & The Beast"; which belongs to Disney. Characters belong to "My Little Pony: 'Friendship Is Magic'"; which belongs to Hasbro.) Anyways, to all you non-Disney fans; and for those who don't like "Beauty & The Beast", don't judge me. Okay. Here we go.
**Music from "Something There" Plays**
Fluttershy: There's something sweet, and almost kind. But he was mean, and he was coarse, and unrefined! And now he's dear, and so unsure. I wonder why I didn't see it there before.
Discord: She glanced this way, I thought I saw. And when we touched, she didn't shudder at my paw! No, it can't be. I'll just ignore. But, then, she's never looked at me that way before.
Fluttershy: New, and a bit...alarming. Who'd have ever thought that this could be? True, that he's no Prince Charming. But there's something in him that I simply didn't see!
Princess Twilight Sparkle: Well, who'd have thought?
Applejack: Well, bless my soul!
Rainbow Dash: Well, who'd have known?
Rarity: Well, who indeed? And who'd have guessed they'd come together on their own?
Applejack: It's so peculiar! Wait and see!
RD/Rarity/Twilight: We'll wait and see!
All Four: A few days more. There may be something there that wasn't there before!
Rainbow Dash: [Spoken: And here's a thought.] Perhaps there's something there that wasn't there before.
Spike: [Spoken: What, Applejack?]
Applejack: (chuckles) There may be something there that wasn't there before.
Spike: [Spoken: What is it? What's there?]
Applejack: [Spoken: I'll tell you when you're older, Sugar Cube.]
Spike: [Okay! I'm older!]
Applejack: [Spoken: *chuckles* Spike! You are a one...]
Pinkie Pie: [Spoken: Come on, Spike.]
**Music from "Something There" Ends**
I'm sorry. I just couldn't resist. The way the chapter was worded, which was very well, with few or no flaws, I felt like I had to do it. I just had to.
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 8 . 4/11/2017
AWWW! That's so sweet!
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 7 . 4/10/2017
No, don't trim your beard, Discord. I like it. Y'know, I think you're the most handsomest draconequus I've ever met. And that's a fact.
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 6 . 4/10/2017
Goodbye, Fluttershy... We will never forget you. *sniffs* _ - (This represents a sad face.) [First time doing it like that.]
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 5 . 4/10/2017
Alright! Can't wait!
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 4 . 4/10/2017
Y'know what?, I actually ship Big Mac x Cheerilee. I think they're cute together. And the fact that their relationship is canon actually helps! Anyways, about who's gonna be Discord's bride. I'm not sure, but, I think it'll be Fluttershy. Seeing that it's a 'FlutterCord' story; it's definitely going to be Fluttershy.
| Luna Hedgefox chapter 3 . 4/10/2017
Don't worry, Twilight. We'll make this right. (to self) I hope...